In my opinion, this is one of the best TBATE fanfics on this site. From the grammar to the interactions and the character designs, everything seems to be going well so far. I suggest whoever is reading this try it out.

To summarize, if you are willing to overlook the obvious flaws in the core system, this is a very well written novel. The writing quality is excellent and deserves five stars, so please expect it to be better than most fanfictions. Certainly, the character design resembles Ayanakoji. So far, the story development appears to be going well, and you can really get into it. The update's stability appears to be satisfactory. The world background consists of five stars. Author, your writing is excellent. I give it a 4.8/5. As previously stated, the core system is horribly written and detracts from the beautiful writing. Still worth reading though!

review based: 26 chapter (drop) Writing - there's snall mistakes but it's readable 5 ⭐ story - its copy from the original i feel like reading the original tbate while reading this but different mc 3 ⭐ characters - for me changing ayano personality to become soft and loving is bad it felt wierd idk if other's will like it so be warned 3 ⭐ update - dc about this part 5 ⭐ World - this book lack world background but im giving this a 4 ⭐ Evaluation: i drop this because the story is same as original and the mc(ayanokoji) becoming soft and loving that's just no for me but except for that this book is good

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if you drop it I'll drop by at your house and you'll disappear for good so don't even thinks bout it

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Well... I am here from Wattpad. Just to tell you all people you should definitely read this story. The grammar and spelling and writing style is leagues better than MOST of authors. Give it a read. 5/5 for me

This is one of the best TBATE fanfics I read, that fact that kiyotoka is MC is enough for me to give it 5 stars. The only thing I don’t like about it is the OC’s you introduced from his world but I guess I’m not used to this kind of troupe yet. I’ll see how it goes.