hmm I'm not really good at writing revs but oh well. first of all writing quality is good an easy 5, the grammar and writing in this is better than most fanfics out there but it still has some typos tho very little but meh who doesn't make mistakes? story development is going good so far I like it and I'm very looking forward to future development especially he and Arthur's encounter. so easy 5 character design is superb man I don't know much about ayanokoji as I have only watched the anime but from there I can see that ayanokoji here is written pretty well, character interaction is also good and other characters aren't just abandoned they have uh... essence? idk I can't accurately describe it cuz I'm starving haha I've binge read this till morning anyways it has essence u know a properly built character not just some empty husk, the changing of different perspective (pov) is also good so overall 5. updating stability hmm idk I just binge it this day but seeing the update date from the last chaps I'll give it a 5, but uhh yo author are u planning on dropping this? hope not.. world background what can I say... just 5 so overall 5/5 here's my review mate hope u don't drop your work, and I'm my next read will be your other tbate fic debacle hope I enjoy it. adios~>_^

To summarize, if you are willing to overlook the obvious flaws in the core system, this is a very well written novel. The writing quality is excellent and deserves five stars, so please expect it to be better than most fanfictions. Certainly, the character design resembles Ayanakoji. So far, the story development appears to be going well, and you can really get into it. The update's stability appears to be satisfactory. The world background consists of five stars. Author, your writing is excellent. I give it a 4.8/5. As previously stated, the core system is horribly written and detracts from the beautiful writing. Still worth reading though!

review based: 26 chapter (drop) Writing - there's snall mistakes but it's readable 5 ⭐ story - its copy from the original i feel like reading the original tbate while reading this but different mc 3 ⭐ characters - for me changing ayano personality to become soft and loving is bad it felt wierd idk if other's will like it so be warned 3 ⭐ update - dc about this part 5 ⭐ World - this book lack world background but im giving this a 4 ⭐ Evaluation: i drop this because the story is same as original and the mc(ayanokoji) becoming soft and loving that's just no for me but except for that this book is good

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if you drop it I'll drop by at your house and you'll disappear for good so don't even thinks bout it

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Well... I am here from Wattpad. Just to tell you all people you should definitely read this story. The grammar and spelling and writing style is leagues better than MOST of authors. Give it a read. 5/5 for me

This is one of the best TBATE fanfics I read, that fact that kiyotoka is MC is enough for me to give it 5 stars. The only thing I don’t like about it is the OC’s you introduced from his world but I guess I’m not used to this kind of troupe yet. I’ll see how it goes.

the best tbate novel out there, great grammar, great depictions of ayanokoji and super good fighting scenes