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equalityLv32yr
2022-11-20 22:31

In my opinion, this is one of the best TBATE fanfics on this site. From the grammar to the interactions and the character designs, everything seems to be going well so far. I suggest whoever is reading this try it out.

TBATE : A Masterpiece

Reprobate69_1
4.5
79 Chs

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Reprobate69_1
Reprobate69_1Author

Thanks a lot. Cheers mate! 🥂

2yr
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Abayomi_Atoyegbe
Abayomi_AtoyegbeLv14

is there any character development for the mc or does he stay the same

Reprobate69_1:Thanks a lot. Cheers mate! 🥂
2yr
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Reprobate69_1
Reprobate69_1Author

Ofc there is. He is trying his best to enjoy this life and have emotions. BUt some habits die hard 😉

Abayomi_Atoyegbe:is there any character development for the mc or does he stay the same
2yr
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Goat13
Goat13Lv4

thank you, sir

2yr
RustyBoi
RustyBoiLv4

Ayanokoji is a weird guy for me. I love him emotionless as he is but i still want to see him experience emotions, it’s weird

Reprobate69_1:Ofc there is. He is trying his best to enjoy this life and have emotions. BUt some habits die hard 😉
2yr
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Reprobate69_1
Reprobate69_1Author

For the second time, he isnt emotionless. He doesn’t over-express them like others. Ofc he has emotions. He can even smile. He said it himself, he can smile but he doesn’t consider that person worthy enough. How tf do you think he is emotionless 😭🤣

RustyBoi:Ayanokoji is a weird guy for me. I love him emotionless as he is but i still want to see him experience emotions, it’s weird
2yr
RustyBoi
RustyBoiLv4

He doesn’t feel love iirc, he wanted to, but was about to be sent back to the white room? Idk, it’s been so long since i’ve read COTE

Reprobate69_1:For the second time, he isnt emotionless. He doesn’t over-express them like others. Ofc he has emotions. He can even smile. He said it himself, he can smile but he doesn’t consider that person worthy enough. How tf do you think he is emotionless 😭🤣
2yr
Reprobate69_1
Reprobate69_1Author

He’s curious about why humans act the way they do. The thing about being emotionless is total bs

RustyBoi:He doesn’t feel love iirc, he wanted to, but was about to be sent back to the white room? Idk, it’s been so long since i’ve read COTE
2yr
RustyBoi
RustyBoiLv4

So he just has trouble understanding emotions or expressions?

Reprobate69_1:He’s curious about why humans act the way they do. The thing about being emotionless is total bs
2yr
Reprobate69_1
Reprobate69_1Author

He questions the irrational display of emotions. Why are emotions the way they are.

RustyBoi:So he just has trouble understanding emotions or expressions?
2yr
Daoist_Shadow_
Daoist_Shadow_Lv4

cheers mate 🍻

1yr
ThorMakina
ThorMakinaLv4

confirmo lo que dice este tipo

1yr
Other Reviews
timelessman
timelessmanLv4

hmm I'm not really good at writing revs but oh well. first of all writing quality is good an easy 5, the grammar and writing in this is better than most fanfics out there but it still has some typos tho very little but meh who doesn't make mistakes? story development is going good so far I like it and I'm very looking forward to future development especially he and Arthur's encounter. so easy 5 character design is superb man I don't know much about ayanokoji as I have only watched the anime but from there I can see that ayanokoji here is written pretty well, character interaction is also good and other characters aren't just abandoned they have uh... essence? idk I can't accurately describe it cuz I'm starving haha I've binge read this till morning anyways it has essence u know a properly built character not just some empty husk, the changing of different perspective (pov) is also good so overall 5. updating stability hmm idk I just binge it this day but seeing the update date from the last chaps I'll give it a 5, but uhh yo author are u planning on dropping this? hope not.. world background what can I say... just 5 so overall 5/5 here's my review mate hope u don't drop your work, and I'm my next read will be your other tbate fic debacle hope I enjoy it. adios~>_^

2yr

Fap2Me
Fap2MeLv3

To summarize, if you are willing to overlook the obvious flaws in the core system, this is a very well written novel. The writing quality is excellent and deserves five stars, so please expect it to be better than most fanfictions. Certainly, the character design resembles Ayanakoji. So far, the story development appears to be going well, and you can really get into it. The update's stability appears to be satisfactory. The world background consists of five stars. Author, your writing is excellent. I give it a 4.8/5. As previously stated, the core system is horribly written and detracts from the beautiful writing. Still worth reading though!

2yr
GreedyHuman
GreedyHumanLv11

review based: 26 chapter (drop) Writing - there's snall mistakes but it's readable 5 ⭐ story - its copy from the original i feel like reading the original tbate while reading this but different mc 3 ⭐ characters - for me changing ayano personality to become soft and loving is bad it felt wierd idk if other's will like it so be warned 3 ⭐ update - dc about this part 5 ⭐ World - this book lack world background but im giving this a 4 ⭐ Evaluation: i drop this because the story is same as original and the mc(ayanokoji) becoming soft and loving that's just no for me but except for that this book is good

2yr
Vaneford
VanefordLv3

Welp my man is not kidding when he said Masterpiece[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
Pythia
PythiaLv12

Reveal spoiler

1yr
KnightMane
KnightManeLv2

if you drop it I'll drop by at your house and you'll disappear for good so don't even thinks bout it

2yr
bullaling
bullalingLv11

. .

2yr
_GLT_
_GLT_Lv1

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

2yr
Baka_Chi_2549
Baka_Chi_2549Lv1

Well... I am here from Wattpad. Just to tell you all people you should definitely read this story. The grammar and spelling and writing style is leagues better than MOST of authors. Give it a read. 5/5 for me

2yr
Insanguis
InsanguisLv4

This is one of the best TBATE fanfics I read, that fact that kiyotoka is MC is enough for me to give it 5 stars. The only thing I don’t like about it is the OC’s you introduced from his world but I guess I’m not used to this kind of troupe yet. I’ll see how it goes.

2yr
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