Item: One Piece : Dungeon
Rating: 3
Author: Lithiel

LithielLv41yr

2024-01-22 07:36

This story is fairly good, however it spends far too much time covering the background portion. Also, it has an incredible amount of grammatical errors, and use of incorrect words. If you hate bad grammar you will not make it through the first few chapters, but the story is a good concept.

One Piece : Dungeon

Arsone

3.8

61 Chs

Liked it!

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LithielLv4

I’m sorry if this is a translation and English is not your native language.

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Fakeuser_17Lv3

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