Truthfully I like the previous version better even if the characters and the world building were a little off. Seriously, couldn't read past chapter 3 of this one . Too much info dump and the MC behaves in a cringe manner. The limitations placed in dungeon make it seems like a video game. I mean bro what's the meaning of no one will die even when killed only loose some level and then you add even if NPC's are killed they will also revive....... Bro it's a pirate world for crying out loud here people slaughter entire countries for no reason and you just came with a way to empower them without any risks......... Well all in all a huge disappointment.
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LIKESorry bro, didn't want to come out offensive but that was my honest review. Don't really want to be a smartass as I can't even write a fanfic but still I gotta say loved your previous one and discarding the previous one for this one was a bad move......
From previous one I mean the one whose rewrite is this one. Not your other novel from this account.
Well, everyone has a different opinion. Some like it, some don't. But, if I use the previous concept, it's too bland and also difficult to develop the story. Besides that, the current concept was that the adventurers of their strength would return to normal strength and also the strength of the monsters was on par with them. In addition, there are other factors such as the strength of the monsters which increases several times at night which causes if I use the previous concept. There would be many deaths in the dungeon and it would only make it difficult to develop the story. There are also a number of other factors that I take into consideration. Well, there is another story that is interesting compared to mine. You can try looking for it on webnovel. Hope you can get it
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oh i see your a average gen z troll that spams ohio jokes thinking their funny
I disagree, he explained it why he hates the story. and even compared it to the rewrite meaning he quite like the rewrite one than this, so he reads it thoroughly to spot the difference and understand the pros and cons of the dungeon having no risk other than losing levels. Fakeuser_17 did a good review at least the author could understand why he hates or like the story and remedy the problem to better the story. unlike those who live a review saying "more" with a lot of 'e's or just "............" giving it five or one star.
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shhh low level trash be quiet
why are you making a noise then? Its no good talking to no life internet troll nothing seems to be intelligent about them go talk to yourself then.
shhhh be quiet go somewhere else mr troll
its seems this troll is indeed have nothing better to do quacking here and there telling everyone to be quite when he is still here making noise, quite the hypocrite. go blow your airs else where your filth is reaching the high heavens and deep the abyss.
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