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WellReadTom
WellReadTomLv41yr
2023-08-06 23:46

I don't see anything wrong with the story keep going.

One Piece : Dungeon

Arsone
3.8
61 Chs

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Athorath
AthorathLv3

............................................................................................................................................................ Its good. Now... WHERE IS THE REST!

2yr

Fakeuser_17
Fakeuser_17Lv3

Truthfully I like the previous version better even if the characters and the world building were a little off. Seriously, couldn't read past chapter 3 of this one . Too much info dump and the MC behaves in a cringe manner. The limitations placed in dungeon make it seems like a video game. I mean bro what's the meaning of no one will die even when killed only loose some level and then you add even if NPC's are killed they will also revive....... Bro it's a pirate world for crying out loud here people slaughter entire countries for no reason and you just came with a way to empower them without any risks......... Well all in all a huge disappointment.

2yr
Daohei
DaoheiLv5

As of chapter 5 Too much details, not enough adventuring, let the characters discover the dungeon with the reader. Otherwise a good concept

2yr
R0B
R0BLv2

No personality, no logic and a very lousy writing. Not recommended at all. Nothing really interesting happens. ---------------------------------------------------------------

2yr
Aim_zx
Aim_zxLv14

It has potential honestly it's just 4 chapters but i love it i hope you don't drop it

2yr
VoidReader8577
VoidReader8577Lv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Nicolas_Bahamondes
Nicolas_BahamondesLv2

the plot is about danmachi, but without the waifus and without the gods, all involved in the world of one piece, a bad idea They should have chosen another world since the one in the open piece doesn't match.

2yr
Xth
XthLv10

Deja Deja Deja Deja Deja vu how many times(4th time???) its gona be reuploaded??

2yr
The_Bored_Immortal
The_Bored_ImmortalLv4

This whole novel feels like something written by a non-english speaking 5th grader, both in grammar and the cohesiveness of the story. Main complaint is that characters are acting completely different from their cannon counterparts and are way too trusting of the MC

2yr
Crownless312
Crownless312Lv4

Very cool idea so keep writing and more chapters plz it’s good

2yr
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