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Juto
JutoLv142yr
2022-10-13 03:56

The concept of the synopsis sound like this would be a decent slice of life novel. Hopefully it can be picked also not let down my initial impression of it. (This is only a temporary placeholder review when a couple (20) chapter is released I will either change with my opinion on the story or delete it all together.)

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Mithren
MithrenLv13

You've got 30 chapters now. Though not my cup of tea it seems like a decent face slappy comedy if you're into that kind of thing.

Juto
JutoLv14

Thanks I'll try it did not realize it was released yet

Mithren:You've got 30 chapters now. Though not my cup of tea it seems like a decent face slappy comedy if you're into that kind of thing.
Juto
JutoLv14

~~ Reviews Update ~~ ~~ As of Chapter Thirty-Four ~~ Thanks to Mithren sending a post to me notifying me chapters are out I have just read the current chapter today. The main character turns out to be someone who gets sent to this new world as a baby (he is conscious not long after birth) waking up to get a sign-in system for key events/locations. After reading and seeing the interaction with his multiple sisters (who are all talented in their own fields) I find the slice of life in this novel is well put together and rather enjoyable. Especially reading the sibling's interaction and petty revenge against each other it's rather hilarious. As Mithren mentioned it does have a level of face slapping, but it is rather contained compared to others of the same genre. it not jumping out constantly in one chapter and the mc is not searching for (aka he is rich and he knows it he not making the simple clothing misunderstandings). Plus when there is face slapping occurring, most of the time it is rather subtle not because he is poor but his age which he is currently eight (It is very reasonable to question whether an eight-year-old can be luxury shopping alone). And the heavily cliche scenes are decently spread out. As of now the main characters mainly focus on relaxation/steady improvement while silently helping his family. So overall as of my current chapter and my initial impression from reading through in one go (would have been chapter Forty but ran out of FPs so stopped at Thirty-Four) I will maintain the original review rating I wrote before the chapter came out 5/5.

King_Nightmare
King_NightmareLv15

goated review. this is what I've been looking for when I go through the comments

Juto:~~ Reviews Update ~~ ~~ As of Chapter Thirty-Four ~~ Thanks to Mithren sending a post to me notifying me chapters are out I have just read the current chapter today. The main character turns out to be someone who gets sent to this new world as a baby (he is conscious not long after birth) waking up to get a sign-in system for key events/locations. After reading and seeing the interaction with his multiple sisters (who are all talented in their own fields) I find the slice of life in this novel is well put together and rather enjoyable. Especially reading the sibling's interaction and petty revenge against each other it's rather hilarious. As Mithren mentioned it does have a level of face slapping, but it is rather contained compared to others of the same genre. it not jumping out constantly in one chapter and the mc is not searching for (aka he is rich and he knows it he not making the simple clothing misunderstandings). Plus when there is face slapping occurring, most of the time it is rather subtle not because he is poor but his age which he is currently eight (It is very reasonable to question whether an eight-year-old can be luxury shopping alone). And the heavily cliche scenes are decently spread out. As of now the main characters mainly focus on relaxation/steady improvement while silently helping his family. So overall as of my current chapter and my initial impression from reading through in one go (would have been chapter Forty but ran out of FPs so stopped at Thirty-Four) I will maintain the original review rating I wrote before the chapter came out 5/5.
Juto
JutoLv14

Thanks :)

King_Nightmare:goated review. this is what I've been looking for when I go through the comments
SkyRexx
SkyRexxLv14

As of now there are a lo of chapters a new review?

Juto:Thanks :)
Juto
JutoLv14

Not a bad idea. I am personally on chapter 254, saving up before continuing. However, I typically only do one or two reviews per story I review. One for the original post/thought and two for an edit/update of the original. I will need a moment for the third edition as I am unsure of the best way to write.

SkyRexx:As of now there are a lo of chapters a new review?
SkyRexx
SkyRexxLv14

Alright then waiting for the next review

Juto:Not a bad idea. I am personally on chapter 254, saving up before continuing. However, I typically only do one or two reviews per story I review. One for the original post/thought and two for an edit/update of the original. I will need a moment for the third edition as I am unsure of the best way to write.
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