Ttory seems to be promising, the background had been laid properly, and paragraph looks great and readable. But, I'm kinda confused with the reasoning behind chapter 4. I see no merit for that irrational decisions, it's more like you're trying to put a banner with the signage of "Please don't read my book". It kinda defeat the purpose of reincarnation and the element of surprise in it. But then again, it's your work and creativity. Feel free to do some trial and error that satisfy the majority of the readers. Reasoning: 1. MC1 died and reincarnated into the body of MC2, MC1 Fade away from existance leaving only his wisdom and experience to MC1. -Suggestion, Just merge their souls and do some BS in it, or possibly make MC1 the bankai of MC2. 2.MC2 decided to spill that he received the memories from MC1 into his family. -Suggestion would be: just shut up.

in terms of action this is 10/10 in romance 1/10 story 4/10 world development 7/10 character development 3/10 In conclusion, you come here because of its history or development, go back where you came from. but if you came for action you are in the right place, it has the fights well planned and developed.

Review after reading 180 Chapters time: Impression: well, i dropped it (probably would come back if the story is completed). It was no longer interesting after reaching 160+ chapters for me, but i pushed through and ended up in the most annoying development ever in chapter 180-181. Average sucky review written by casual reader : -It was nice read, the development of power for the MC and his peerage are fun to read. -The interaction/conversation/bickering for some people, can be quite annoying and cringe, but it was nice at first for me, then i got bored of it, then it became cringe inducing, finally annoyed. -The fight is especially great in this novel, the writer is great at describing it and especially what made me stay for so long despite many annoying things about this novel. (but i hate it when the fight becomes unnecesarily drawn out, just filled with trah talk, that pretty happen much what made the charm of the novel lost for me). -Harem. well, it was nice at the first 4-5 harem members, more and more though, well it became bland. (but the author are a great conversation writer, so the Relationship is rich, but like i said at the beginning, it can become interesting cringe really easily). that's it. peace out.

I wish I would donate for this book . One of my favorite books so far it's pretty great ice plot so far and I like hat you have done so far can't wait to see what comes of it.

The first 4 chapters were weird but the rest were entertaining so far, I recommend you give this a try.

No demons can interfere in the internal affairs of clans, especially such as Gremori and Sitri. And even more so to order them something. This stupidity alone negates all the positive aspects of the work.

the writing is great but the story is bad, for me ofc, the way you put the story and the 'romance' is very very cringe to "me" but it's bearable nonetheless, and it's my first time reading a bleach power in dxd world, unique, as for the story development, was very cliche, as well as relationship between the character it dxd, and that all I can say

50 chapters in and it is the most annoying reading experience I ever had.

This has been a fun read, I LOVE Bleach and I can’t wait to see what he does next!