Ttory seems to be promising, the background had been laid properly, and paragraph looks great and readable. But, I'm kinda confused with the reasoning behind chapter 4. I see no merit for that irrational decisions, it's more like you're trying to put a banner with the signage of "Please don't read my book". It kinda defeat the purpose of reincarnation and the element of surprise in it. But then again, it's your work and creativity. Feel free to do some trial and error that satisfy the majority of the readers. Reasoning: 1. MC1 died and reincarnated into the body of MC2, MC1 Fade away from existance leaving only his wisdom and experience to MC1. -Suggestion, Just merge their souls and do some BS in it, or possibly make MC1 the bankai of MC2. 2.MC2 decided to spill that he received the memories from MC1 into his family. -Suggestion would be: just shut up.
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this spoils the immersion, I know that the author tries to create some kind of realism for the protagonist... but what does he gain by talking about past lives? he should live his own life, this kind of knowledge is barely his business, much less for strangers or relatives
The later chapters show that the author just isn't going for an isekai but rather, a fanfic with various crossovers from other stories. (Currently I can recognise devil may cry and bleach , some other stuff is published by mc as manga) (In case anyone reads your review)
Interesting
why add many great heriones if they wont end in his harem
Man the woman in the harem are bi
So theres yuri I take it?
For real ?
mc is six years old and he is immature, so he told his memories to his family. although he experienced the life of mc1 like a dream that doesn't make him experience the life in reality. it's like how you watch a movie.
