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SnyperLife
SnyperLifeLv42yr
2022-11-11 20:11

Great novel as always! Ive followed warping hero and this fic is just as great, and even better in a few aspects! Can't wait to see how it goes

Naruto: Marionette of Suna

TeemVizzle
4.7
49 Chs

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Byakugan2121
Byakugan2121Lv1

A very nice fic. I haven't seen a lot of non-konoha fics so it's pretty cool. The thread release is also pretty interesting ability and author makes creative uses of it. I love the OC's and other characters. Suna is also somewhat developed and fleshed and i cant wait to see where this goes

2yr

DaoistzOmTwU
DaoistzOmTwULv1

I love this fic! The writing, the plot, the fight scenes, the characters. All are superb. There's great development of characters and I love the character interactions. Minato and Ay being MC's rivals as fellow potential future Kage is incredible and well written. Can't wait for more chapters!

2yr
WoahBuddy
WoahBuddyLv1

I read through the latest chapter, 16. I highly enjoyed it. I hope the author will continue with this. What I like most are the characters. They're unique, and the author has a good sense of imagination. I like the idea of an air bender/monk and string fruit powers from One Piece. It strangely fits with the Sand village. The author does a great job of writing the setting and character development. I'd say the biggest issue for this novel would be the writing itself. There is a tendency to repeat certain expressions and words. It's not too noticeable, but it's still in every chapter. It makes the overall text awkward to read. Expanding vocabulary could help. I'll give this a 4.4/5.

2yr
TeemVizzle
TeemVizzleAuthor

As always, mandatory and shameless authour review. Additional info: - Romance will be slow and non-harem - Takes place in Minato's generation - MC will be modeled on 2 characters in particular. Souei from Tensura and Doflamingo from One piece That's it. Have a good day.

2yr
Fredmoney07
Fredmoney07Lv10

you wrote canon basically just changed the village and ppl. not interesting at all. boy boy girl team. smiling dumb mc. emo side. loud girl. team test is boring. kid complaining to kage about going on c rank is canon boring... first mission almost die..boring. you didnt make anything new except the thread thing which is just from one piece.

1yr
Aashutosh_Maurya_2893
Aashutosh_Maurya_2893Lv4

I am currently reading first 1st fan fiction of this author and already having a high expectations for this fan fiction.

2yr
TheManCandy
TheManCandyLv14

I want to read it, but I'm a bit afraid that it'll be like your MHA fanfic. It was a good read but you stopped updating it. So quick question. You're not dropping this one right?here's a 5 star for answering this.

1yr
Pillarsofsand
PillarsofsandLv1

Very good fic👍 .............................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
Darkiling
DarkilingLv1

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2yr
1000Sunny
1000SunnyLv4

Great story, I am loving it!!! Super happy I found this :D

2yr
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