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poposwitchLv21yr
2023-03-12 19:23

So... good Please don't drop Make p a t r i o n -> story is worth it. --- A lot more grounded & mindful adaption of "custo made demon kings powers". M.c. is smart enough to overcome him drawbacks and negative Status using his cheats --- I just hope the author doesn't do the usual thing in this novels & power him up too fast leaving us without the sence of excitement... but you wanna go that route refer "meta essence gacha". & consider out of dc arcs where m.c. gain more power experience & enjoy being a murder-hobo on an omniversal scale. Hide ROB would love that.

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P.s. i wanted to recommend him making some sort of smart drug / mind enhancer like 1. NZT-48 - from Limitless.. or 2. processed mega-seed juice - from Rick & morty. Ect... --- But, a character could only be as smart as the author (no disrespect) but it's impossible for someone to be as smart as a fictional character... so.. just make it extremely expensive & last for a very short time... because being super genius wouldn't just make him OP in the context of the dc muliverse, but it would also let him exploit his "sustom-made system" to a ridiculous degree.. ... Him getting 10 limitless pills (that would last him a fey weeks) is enough lets figure them out & make it himself without using the system... that would be broken... & .. I don't think ROB would like that so he would nerf it immediately. ... .. . So those could be like his special tools that he busts out when he really REALLY needs to... (and the moment he pops the pill/drinks the juice, he is on a race against time to take advantage of it before the effects run out) you can prolong the fight or end it immediate to decide how much op you want to make him.

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