Warning: It has a bit of spoilers, but just a tiny little though. [Writing Quality] - 5 Stars [Stability of Updates] - 5 Stars [Story Development] - 5 Stars [Character Design] - 4 or 3 Stars [World Background] - 5 Stars [Review About The Fanfic]: The story is original and polished. The events that take place are not forced and flow smoothly throughout the chapter, giving hints at conspiracies and mysterious events surrounding the protagonist, his family, his unique tech, and everything. The author knows how to set up a stage for a big plot. The world background is also very good. not overly detailed, just enough for it to work nice and easy. Updates are consistent until now, and the grammar is almost perfect (i can only remember seeing two wrong words in 20+ chapters). The character is accurate and reasonable for a dystopian city and poor upbringing in the streets, though it doesn't really mean I like him. Even before tragedy struck him, he was kinda of an @ssh*le. Acurrate in the setting. Doesn't mean I have to like him though. I do hope he gradually chills overtime, it would be a pitty to drop this for just this particular reason. Just a reminder, this is personal taste rather than an imparcial review about the character. [Review About The Author]: Gotta say, your Zero no Tsukaima fanfic, while very detailed and with an interesting and unique plot, has the most unlikable character I've ever seen (or rather, that I put up the most before eventually dropping), just so dumb, stupid, and a thousand other things. He had no common sense or intellect, and excusing this on his age does not help making it tolerable for much longer, each chapter was painful. I do give props for everything else though. Your witcher fanfic romance and ending was not great, lets leave it at that. I sincerely hope you try to make this fanfic, which already has an awesome start, work. The character growth, the romance (maybe even delete it completely if it means saving the fanfic), I'm worried about those 2 elements. That's all I have to say, have a good one. :D
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LIKEThe other characters are also designed pretty good until now.
thanks for the review... I'd have preferred you reviewed my books separately but whatevs. anyway i more than anyone know my faults so I'm trying to stay ahead of them.
Fair. And good enough for me.
Niggross:thanks for the review... I'd have preferred you reviewed my books separately but whatevs. anyway i more than anyone know my faults so I'm trying to stay ahead of them.image
U might wanna check out steel waste too. apparently that's one of my better works
MegaMacho:Fair. And good enough for me.
Not gonna lie, didn't read it at all. I love fallout, but I can't imagine actually reading it a fanfic about it. I think the universe is a bit hopeless, since everyone is pretty much screwed in the apocalypse and with no true way out that doesn't take ages to be done. Don't know if you get me, kinda hard to put into words.
Niggross:U might wanna check out steel waste too. apparently that's one of my better works
