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Zizinho21
Zizinho21Lv42yr
2022-10-18 01:22

As of chapter 20 (I think it was) I like pretty much everything about the novel. Haven't seen any grammar mistakes (not that I notice those anymore) or any glaring inconsistencies. I like the plot and how it's going so far. The only thing I don't really want to happen is for there to be a three way relationship between MC x Ciri x Serana, if there really ends up being a relationship between Serana I'd rather Ciri didn't get involved in it, not a great big fan of harem, open relationships and yuri.

A Swallow's Path

Pythia
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56 Chs

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Pythia
PythiaAuthor

I don't think it's happening. I reviewed my work and it just seems to much non cannon work to be interesting or within Lucius's character. Serana will be a good friend though.

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Zizinho21
Zizinho21Lv4

bery gud

Pythia:I don't think it's happening. I reviewed my work and it just seems to much non cannon work to be interesting or within Lucius's character. Serana will be a good friend though.
2yr
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Pythia
PythiaAuthor

Shameless.....Why not right? I'm new so all advice and criticism is very welcome :) ....................................................................................................................

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NomadicWaffle
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Gotta say, I don't do Reviews on anything but this book is great, I would suggest it to anyone who is lookingnfor a good FF to read sadly enough I went through the chapters like a sponge duebto how good they are

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LunariaN
LunariaNLv5

Main Character is half elf and the Dragonborn from Skyrim(Elder Scrolls) world, and the Female Lead is Ciri from The Witcher world. to me they are a perfect match, and together I can see them travel together to other worlds when they solve their worlds own problems.

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Spanyco
SpanycoLv1

It won't be a criticism but a compliment. I love skyrim and the witcher, but unfortunately the fanfics about these worlds are almost nil, and the few that have either been dropped, or are just too horrible. You're doing a great job on character development, don't mind the comments that talk about slow development, don't rush an artist when he's working. If you feel that 50, 100, 150 or more chapters are necessary for the story to develop your way, then just do it.

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SwanDive
SwanDiveLv2

It’s great so far. I especially liked the fact you showed people who aren’t lovers or barely even friends can still be nice to each other. Something this site lacks in my opinion because “emotions make men weak” or whatever these insecure boys say. The only improvement I can suggest is to focus on worldbuilding a little more but then again that’s very minor considering it’s set in Skyrim.

2yr
The_butcher
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..I love it.. the plot is good the story line is perfect with a bit of fun and plot a bit rushed but all too perfectly narrated... good job author keep it up keep going and love it sending you energy..🥰

1yr
LunariaN
LunariaNLv5

my favorite fic in Webnovel right now, I gave it one, yes, but what about second review? hoping for this fic to continue until it's complete.

2yr
xKitetsu
xKitetsuLv4

I absolutely love this book it is exactly what I’ve been looking for. A story about a crossover between 2 of my favourite franchises that is well written and structured. The conversations are natural and the setting and development is done perfectly. Thank you for this story and please keep up your great work ! :)

2yr
TheLastSpider
TheLastSpiderLv14

It's a great book so far can't wait to see the stuff later that will happen as they travel around skyrim and also get to the dlc's. I am curious to also see the next arcs after everything's done in skyrim to see if they go to the other provinces around Tamriel and the arcs in the other worlds. Stay "Evil" author.

2yr
Leonsfantasy
LeonsfantasyLv4

Interesting can't wait to see what you'll do with the story.................................................................................

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