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Jackleell
JackleellLv17mth
2024-06-13 11:43

I'll be honest: the premise of this fanfic is good, but the overall story is bad. It almost feels like an AI wrote the entire thing. I wouldn't mind if the AI was good, but as I read, it uses so many unnecessary words that make me wonder if there was any human touch at all. Every word is predictable, and there is too much unnecessary detail. Sometimes, the author (or the AI) repeats themselves, which is frustrating. And now, they want us to pay to read AI-written work.

Game of Thrones: Lord of the Seven Seas

Axel_wheel
4.4
97 Chs

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Matthew_Dominic_3591
Matthew_Dominic_3591Lv1

thanks for taking that bullet man hate it when authors use ai to puff up the word count

1mth
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Arkhengelsk54
Arkhengelsk54Lv4

Use it for the grammar but not the story. I use AI too for schoolwork, etc., but I don't have it write my essays for me. 😢

Matthew_Dominic_3591:thanks for taking that bullet man hate it when authors use ai to puff up the word count
1mth
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_Darker_Than_Black
_Darker_Than_BlackLv13

Rating distribution — 3,3,2,4,3 I mainly disliked the story for naivety and softness of MC. He isn't suitable for GOT as his mindset and personality is too kind. And from experience I know the story will change itself to accomodate the MC not the other way around. So you can safely say it won't give the GOT vibe.

8mth

Uveilazatrum
UveilazatrumLv6

It's like author have no idea how medieval world works. My review may be "wrong" because I only managed to read ten chapters

1yr
BanTheKitten
BanTheKittenLv14

Thus is a very interesting story. Starting way before the game of thrones TV series time line since MC is the brother of the father of the original cast, he also has some powers to help him on his way. Very quickly in the story we find out that MC is a real adventure types and wants to see the whole world he is in now. While also having Magik powers starting him as a warg mage. And a real seafarer.

1yr
HSG_1999
HSG_1999Lv14

So far so good, hope for more,not really enough to really go on but not disappointed.

2yr
Armand_Targaryen
Armand_TargaryenLv6

Me encantó la novela. Espero que continúes con la novela y la actualices rápido. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................

11mth
DaoistTP0fHy
DaoistTP0fHyLv4

i think the novel is good for now and maybe it will only need time and more chapter to get betteri dont mind the harem in ancient times having a harem was very ordinary i hope the novel will have more chapter

1yr
tujan_pokhrel
tujan_pokhrelLv4

plz update your one-piece fanfic its awesome.

9mth
Daoist0Taxve
Daoist0TaxveLv1

Хорошое произведение, мне понравилось. Развитие сюжета на 5/5. Текст тоже хорошое 5/5. Система тоже нормальное, может козатся слишком ИМ, но только на первый взгляд 4/5.

1yr
Rocio_Machado
Rocio_MachadoLv1

Bastante bien. El sistema está bastante bien. Y la idea es interésante. Pero los primeros 20 capítulos son algo lentos. El protagonista tiene una personalidad rara.... Te cae bien en algunos capítulos y en otros no mucho.

1yr
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