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Primordial
PrimordialLv141yr
2023-10-26 00:13

It is a fantastic novel. The background is good and the AU elements are introduced in such a way that still respects the original work, Atleast till chapter 16, which is one of the hallmarks of a good novel imo. The AU elements will need a very slow introduction to fuse into the HP lore The only caviat is the probably the writing style. The flow is confusing at times and it makes it difficult to differentiate who is speaking which lines. Another factor is the excitement and suspense. As of yet, the buildup is slow. I could miss a chapter or 2 and would not care. I would also advice to not bash any characters and not glorify others as many do with making Snape a good guy and James a bully. The novel is also already touching the line of Albus and Minerva mild bashing genre which also a very common theme. Also Please PLEASE. No crossover or Harem

Harry Potter: The art of divination

Booggie
4.6
223 Chs

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Booggie
BooggieAuthor

No bashing any character I don’t like bashing at all. I will work on making dialogue better thank you

1yr
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Booggie
BooggieAuthor

Honest author review, I honestly think the story and world I am building is wonderful. What I would say Is if you like fights every other chapter this ff isn’t for you. Yes there will be battles and fights but not a crazy amount in the beginning, in saying this i still wouldn’t classify my ff as a slow burn I think it’s more of a medium. I am trying to build a world that you can fully immerse yourself in. I hope you give my ff a try, thank you for reading this if you did!

1yr

R0B
R0BLv2

I liked it, but I won't continue to read it, here's the reason why: Morpheus (mc) is not a lord of dreams, he is just an immortal magician who specialize in divination and rituals. The story is in Harry's parents timeline. The demons and angels are just not hp material. The story doesn't relatable to me in any way, so there's no need to read it.

1yr
Arion_Sturmklinge
Arion_SturmklingeLv2

Quite good grammar, The story has no logic errors and it lacks plot holes. And the best part it is an interesting Story with no Harem !!!

1yr
Yuna_sama
Yuna_samaLv5

So far I love it, keep up the good work author-San!

1yr
STEVIOL_GLY
STEVIOL_GLYLv3

I am sold. I always thought the prophecy and divination in harry potter to be underrated than it is, and this fic is something I need, please don't drop and make him make prophecies and make them famous author

1yr
Jccr
JccrLv4

Wow I didn't expect to find a gem like this, it's only the first few chapters but the world building and the main character are quite novel something that stands out among so many generic stories, for the moment I'm not going to get my hopes up too high because there are only a few chapters, only time will tell if the story is really good or just another mediocre story with a good start.

1yr
Tio_Iroh99
Tio_Iroh99Lv12

I'm not one to write reviews nor am I good at them, but this is a hidden gem, with AU elements but keeping true to the essence of HP. Don't expect it to be all faithful and neither, as far as I can see is Voldemort being the final villain, as there are mythical elements involved. If you expect an HP fic faithful to the books don't read it, but if you expect a good fic with original and expanded world building with mythic elements but without bordering on the absurd, this is totally your cup of tea.

11mth
gregory_tsamos
gregory_tsamosLv3

This is getting better and better as i read. Keep up the good work!

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

I was quite skeptical at first, but hey the story quite actually worked.

1yr
GramGeb
GramGebLv14

great story. it's written very good and is compelling please continue to update

1yr
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