I liked it, but I won't continue to read it, here's the reason why: Morpheus (mc) is not a lord of dreams, he is just an immortal magician who specialize in divination and rituals. The story is in Harry's parents timeline. The demons and angels are just not hp material. The story doesn't relatable to me in any way, so there's no need to read it.
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Thank you for the honest review, why I chose his name for this story is very delibrit. Sadly I cannot tell you as it would be a spoiler. The demons and angles might or might not be some characters you know from hp btw
I agree 100% about Angel, Demon part. I really like the premise of this story, but an existence of Immortal, God, Angel and Demon will drastically change thing. Voldemort is no longer a biggest threat when those can existed. Not to mention, when he can achieve his immortal gold without horcrux just make thing more complicate.
It's a world of magic why should it be boring and predictable with just a Lord Voldemort as a bad guy, and only 1 way of staving off death. I personally love the originality of this instead of most fanfics that keep it uncomplicated as you call it and basically rewrite the original with like only 2 or 3 differences
JRZTT1246:I agree 100% about Angel, Demon part. I really like the premise of this story, but an existence of Immortal, God, Angel and Demon will drastically change thing. Voldemort is no longer a biggest threat when those can existed. Not to mention, when he can achieve his immortal gold without horcrux just make thing more complicate.
How are demons, angels, and gods not hp material? They are inherently mysterious, mythical, and magical creatures. So, for them to be part of a magical world makes complete sense. Though I can understand if it may not be to your taste due to the difference in times with the original
1st because you need to change entire narrative and the world law to fit it in. In HP world, Immortal is suppose to be something almost impossible to achieve and very limit even if you get it. However, in this new narrative, it was much more common since MC already have it somehow. If it easy and achievable with multiple way to attain, then everyone would already have it and there is no threat that can really be kill since everyone just can get immortality. 2nd, with new race, author need to add oc character to fit it into the story or change the race of existing character. Both are not appealing to many readers. You can change the story while still respect to the original law/lore without breaking it apart with unnecessary element. But just like you like the originally of this story, I just dislike that unnesesasy element of it. It's just different in opinion, that's all.
Tyler_Dier:It's a world of magic why should it be boring and predictable with just a Lord Voldemort as a bad guy, and only 1 way of staving off death. I personally love the originality of this instead of most fanfics that keep it uncomplicated as you call it and basically rewrite the original with like only 2 or 3 differences
