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Celestial_KaiserLv41yr
2023-07-06 18:36

Honestly, it was good until author killed Yao lao. After that incident, the author is just dragging the plot. It's literally boring. Same old helping MC's buddies to increase there cultivation then increasing MC's cultivation so that he won't be left to far behind. It feels like system is there to help MC's wives rather than helping him. Not to mention, author is not even utilizing the system properly. So, it 3 star form me...

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Josh_Richie
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Wait, for real? He killed Yao?

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