good novel author. you story has potential to grow. and it's hyping with just a few chapters that I've red and it has a wonderful storyline and background coming from the perspective of mine a free reader . I hope you don't drop your story I'll always be reading your updated chapters praying for your good health mentally and physically 👌🤗✌️

Great Kingdom building novel so far and I hope it keeps getting more updates!!!!

The Kingdom Building series presents a captivating storyline, but there are certain aspects that require further clarification and development. Allow me to address your concerns regarding the plot: Arquebus: The lack of explanation regarding barrel production and the manual manufacturing of arquebuses raises questions about the feasibility and efficiency of such processes without advanced machinery or smelting techniques. Cannons: The absence of a comprehensive explanation regarding the creation of cannons, especially cast iron cannons, leaves uncertainty about the availability of necessary resources, such as coal, for their construction. Gunpowder: The origin of saltpeter, a vital component of gunpowder, is not adequately addressed in the narrative. It is essential to establish a believable source of saltpeter and sulfur for sustained large-scale ammunition production. Steam Engine: While the introduction of a steam engine is intriguing, the story lacks details about its creation and the protagonist's ability to manufacture precise parts without access to machine tools or advanced engineering techniques. Blackout: The abilities and capabilities of the Blackout group, particularly their exceptional infiltration skills, may seem overly powerful and not fully explained within the context of the medieval setting. Russell: The abrupt transformation of Russell from a peaceful painter to a murderer lacks proper character development and motivation. It would benefit the story to establish dissatisfaction or conflicts within Russell's life before depicting him as someone capable of such actions. Travel: The ease with which characters traverse between different countries without established roads raises questions about the feasibility and time constraints involved. Additionally, the annual meetings of Blackout members, requiring extensive travel, seem logistically challenging in the absence of efficient transportation systems. Overall, while the Kingdom Building series offers an engaging plot, there is room for improvement in providing more detailed explanations and addressing the logical and technical aspects of the depicted time period and technological advancements.

im at chapter 150 I like the story so far but one of the main reasons I started reading this novel is conquerer tag I hope we see some war and expansion soon because if you just keep writing on developing of the kingdom it will get boring bo matter how good you right it eventually people will get bored of it so I hope you keep in mind you need a balance between kingdombuilding and conquerer

I gave this story another chance but.. I'm still getting hung up with how Blackout gets their information or their funding. The kingdom they belong to just lost in a war.. But they dont still have money to try funding a economic sabotage? And how come they move so fast? They can get information so fast? They even have the same level of technology with the MC now. Blackout is just too OP.

I like reading Kingdom building novels and when this novel started I thought this was one of the best KB novels on web novel but recent chapters has been a huge let down. reading till chapter 350, the MC comes from a modern world yet has not shown any progress when handling diplomacy. I mean the way author has shown how diplomacy is handled by Riz or Rythium kingdom is very basic, even having a minister and ministry to handle external affairs they have not shown professionalism or handled things properly post war. Also why has author neglected the Spy network when crucial information about war and certain things have not been passed back to kingdom, the Inver issue was handled badly. Also the way war was won by being lucky is kinda let down. Hopefully author improves these things ( read other kingdom building novels if you have to).

Reveal spoiler

i'm on chapter 265, and i think this novel deserve more readers!!! such a great kingdom building story, may as well said this is the best currently on Webnovel!!

Relatable I am also untalented.