The story is almost exclusively told to the readers. Almost 10 chapters were just a slightly altered rehash of the movie. Everything comes too easily. There is (in my opinion) next to no story. I've no interest in the MC as there's nothing relatable. I react more emotionally to all the bashing of corporate greed ruining good games then I do the blank MC. Perhaps the writing improves but I can't tell as of yet. The concept is interesting and may be the saving grace of the whole thing. As long as you're alright reading a story that's told to you and are more interested in the idea of the story than good writing this can be an okay read. Personally I'd love to read this once it is rewritten though I don't think that'll happen.
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yep i already see all the film and what he did is just retelling the story while make the streamer like a commentator and love struck teenager
