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2023-02-28 08:27

DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME WITH THIS NOVEL. There is no character development, or world building, nothing. The only thing that happens here, is the author just explaining how games in our world are played by other people. I swear that you’d be off better just playing the games mentioned here. The MC is the dumbest character I’ve seen in a while, total moron. Super forced dialogues, cringe dialogues, and overall bad storytelling. I’d say that the author didn’t know what to really write, so he just created a type of base of the story, and relied on literally explaining how games in our wolrd are about. The protagonist is supposed to be a developer or something like that, but we never see actual development because the “system” does everything. And because of that, the protagonist is… no protagonist at all. He is not the main character in his own story because we only know about him when the “fans” want another part of the game series. That is all.

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