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N_RRLv42yr
2023-01-08 07:00

Hello!! First off all I very happy and pleased to seen an Indian Author, as I am a fellow Indian myself.🙃 So, regrading the novel. TBH, have a mixed thoughts about it. I really like the Eshwar(Protagonist) and also the side character who have their own and unique personalities. Well in the end character design was good. But can't be said same for the story though. Don't get me wrong, the story is good and it has its moments, but what I am saying is the lack of confirmation from Author to the readers and it looks to much complicated.(especially his past life stuff and the reason behind his current mental problem, he will be going through occasionally) Well atleast thats what I felt or more like I am someone who prefers clarifications while reading particularly, about MC's state. Despite the above mentioned my opinion, I atleast enjoyed the novel and had a constant smile while reading through the chapters. Anyway, liked ur work Dear Author hope you will continue. Note: This review is posted after only reading 140 chapters. NOT DROOPED. Only Paused. Will continue Later.

Villain of my own novel

_Eshwar_
3.9
394 Chs

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_Eshwar_Author

Thank you for your honest review and the clarity about Eshwar(Protagonist) is given in the recently released chapters, hope you enjoy the future chapters and Thank you for reading!!

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dylan_pyleLv14

is the MC truly selfish though l,most authors lie.For example true selfishness requires an amptheric mind

_Eshwar_:Thank you for your honest review and the clarity about Eshwar(Protagonist) is given in the recently released chapters, hope you enjoy the future chapters and Thank you for reading!!
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2yr
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_Eshwar_Author

Amptheric???

dylan_pyle:is the MC truly selfish though l,most authors lie.For example true selfishness requires an amptheric mind
2yr
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_Eshwar_Author

According to me, selfishness is me and mine, so MC is like that, thank you for reading and hope you enjoy the story.

dylan_pyle:is the MC truly selfish though l,most authors lie.For example true selfishness requires an amptheric mind
2yr
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dylan_pyleLv14

apathetic basically no attachment or feeling any restraint for mercy for anything really

2yr
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Andrew_KINGLv14

Can you explain a bit more about the mc? I'm curious about his personality.

_Eshwar_:Amptheric???
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2yr
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_Eshwar_Author

He is selfish, as he cares on about only "himself and what's his," enamored, doesn't really care much about the way if he can get what he wants done, and really hates when someone touches what's his, kinda egoistic, and there are many more, his character can be understood quite easily in the first few chapters (I think), how and why he became like that is in the future chapters, though not completely I hope I described his character a bit, Thank you very much, and hope you enjoy the story.

Andrew_KING:Can you explain a bit more about the mc? I'm curious about his personality.
2yr
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Kakashi_Lv4

waste novel [img=disgusted]

2yr
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SmyiesLv14

Are there lemons?

_Eshwar_:He is selfish, as he cares on about only "himself and what's his," enamored, doesn't really care much about the way if he can get what he wants done, and really hates when someone touches what's his, kinda egoistic, and there are many more, his character can be understood quite easily in the first few chapters (I think), how and why he became like that is in the future chapters, though not completely I hope I described his character a bit, Thank you very much, and hope you enjoy the story.
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Nekomiko_succubusLv12

is this harem?

_Eshwar_:He is selfish, as he cares on about only "himself and what's his," enamored, doesn't really care much about the way if he can get what he wants done, and really hates when someone touches what's his, kinda egoistic, and there are many more, his character can be understood quite easily in the first few chapters (I think), how and why he became like that is in the future chapters, though not completely I hope I described his character a bit, Thank you very much, and hope you enjoy the story.
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1yr
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masterkiritojjLv2

Is mc villainous?

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_Eshwar_Author

Hello, Eshwar here, it is officially chapter 200!!! Yay!! When I started I didn't think much about my novel, now I have come to love it and it is my second millstone!! All of the interactions have helped me a ton, though I don't know how to say anything else except thank you, and again my head is filled with spoilers so let me know how the novel is please, then until next time [Peace] Thank you for reading. Thank you for all the comments, you may not know but they have helped me a lot to continue writing, so again thank you very much.

2yr
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_Eshwar_Author

Hello people, this is Eshwar, it's now chapter 303, the genre has changed to Weak-to-strong, this is my third milestone!!! (Woohoo!!) I wanted to post a review yesterday, but I forgot, till now I realised that the story mostly contained things about the MC Eshwar, so I am learning of how to give more depth to other characters that are directly or indirectly related to the MC, this my first novel in which I have learnt many things, for which I am extremely thankful for the novel and you guys, there are still a tonne of things that have yet to learn, so while I learn and grow, hope you guys enjoy the story, thank you, thank you, thank you (for your mind, body, and soul), thank you very much, the story will get interesting from here on (more interesting than before), thank you for reading, hope you enjoy reading, and as always, [Peace]

1yr
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SenaioLv3

If you came here for a villain( a real villain) then please leave as this is not for you and me. Cause this is just another anti hero. He kills other villain. So calling him villain is far away. The Arthur should change the name and remove the villain tag as it misleads the people who want to read real villain.

2yr
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_Eshwar_Author

Hello, Eshwar here 👋, it's chapter 71 currently and the end of Vol.1 introductions. Thank you for reading and Thank you for all the comments, they have motivated me a lot. I just wanted to leave another review after the end of Vol.1 so, I got nothing else to say. [peace out!]

2yr
10
4
_Eshwar_Author

If you are here, please give it a try, it's good(I think) and I'm still trying to improve, so I'm sure it'll get better. thank you for reading.

2yr
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_Eshwar_Author

Hello, Eshwar here. Due to something happening I kinds stressed out about it and the story had started to awry (not exactly sure how you feel, but I just feel like I added few fillers here and there), so from the next chapter I'll be back at my own pace, their won't be any noticeable changes though. Anyway, just wanted to let this be known, thank you for reading and. [Peace] ahem, I have posted this in the recent chapter (Ch: Changes) it is just a copy and paste with few new words, anyway, hope you enjoy the story. thank you for reading. [Peace]

2yr
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ZikizikiLv11

The way author keeps on switching perspectives and repeats the last chapter at the beginning of the next one makes it difficult to read. It's makes novel read so bad that I can't help but feel like it's purpose is to farm word count.

1yr
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keith_playzLv4

to be honest the novel is just pure confusing to reading I won't recommend reading it

1yr
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Daoist_IgNLv6

Reveal spoiler

2yr
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