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RegisEonLv152yr
2022-12-24 14:59

While I genuinely enjoy the story, the last few chapters (20-27) have hade two issues. first George and Davis names were switches. second there has been an increase in typos, unfinished sentences, and auto corrected mistakes. None of this is impossible to fix so it's not too big of an issue so long as it's prevented in the future.

I created Magic!

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RegisEonLv15

switched not switches

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Ghost_WorkerAuthor

thanks for letting me know, it's been corrected now.

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Ghost_WorkerAuthor

Lol thanks.

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