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PeterthepanLv22yr
2022-12-07 15:56

Nice book author, i am impressed with your writing and creativity.. I hope you keep writing and don't get tired. above all, everything about the books is notable, starting from the characters down to the plot. Five stars to you!

I created Magic!

Ghost_Worker
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Ghost_WorkerAuthor

Author here! if there are any questions regarding the novel ask them here I'll gladly answer.🙂

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WutianBuddahLv13

although it just the first chapter it seems to have potential. though I hope it doesn't turn into one of those face slapping kind of novels'. young master here. ..elder there.. grandpa here. .ancestor here. I'm keeping up with this just incase i get a surprise and it turns out to be different

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Natsu_Drag_6242Lv3

Reveal spoiler

1yr
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ib_zLv15

I love the story it developed pretty well and has good explanation in things although I do hate how many chapters just have “duplicate don’t buy” “fix later” it’s so annoying literally 8 chapters in a row are all either duplicate or fix later and sometimes I buy a batch and a bunch ends up like that

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RaychbunniLv13

Gotta love a scientist MC, I cannot wait to see how he adapts to this new world and grows. The world's background is interesting and I also cannot wait to see how he adapts his scientific knowledge with the magical knowledge he'll gain.

2yr
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Santy_MelayLv1

I hope there is romance, the truth, it gives it a special touch. Ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssfjfjfjjfufrhcbfdhjcbdbwhchevfvhxhfhfhrhhfhrhdhxhehcu

2yr
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RegisEonLv15

While I genuinely enjoy the story, the last few chapters (20-27) have hade two issues. first George and Davis names were switches. second there has been an increase in typos, unfinished sentences, and auto corrected mistakes. None of this is impossible to fix so it's not too big of an issue so long as it's prevented in the future.

2yr
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Khadija_MayoLv1

Nice language, a well-balanced point of view, and a wonderfully presented backdrop with far too much detail of it. Give your readers some time to picture it; you're being very specific. It's the first time I've come across a story set in the prehistoric past. I find reincarnation and the concept of several realms appealing.

2yr
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noiasLv3

this aint updated yet ?😞 .. . z z z z z

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