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Evil mc 😈 Love an mc who is loyal to his goals and motivations and is rational in an immortal with a balance of ruthlessness and merciless nature love it author.

I must say good story though I haven’t reached far yet. The story so far has been alright the mc fits the tittle villain but the only downside I have is that it doesn’t give off a dark novel feel but apart from that it good

The book is intriguing primarily because of the villainous trait of the main character. Not too thrilled about the beginning but deciding to give the future chapters a chance didn't disappoint. Everyone's happy cuz there's no romance, geez. This part ticked me off at first. Okay, I'm a fan of romance but I noticed that with the present storyline, including romance would ruin everything. Where would you even add it? It would only give Mike a weakness and I'm pretty sure that's the last thing ve needs right now. However, I expect less robotic side characters. World building is excellent but what brought down the ratings from 5.0 is the lacking character design and unstable writing quality. Poor at the beginning but gets better as the story progresses.

Overall and good points: So far, it is the typical transmigration story with a system. It is however, not a revenge story and the aim for now is to survive. The background setting is quite interesting family wise. On top of that, the content is quite easy to comprehend. Nevertheless, what makes this story interesting is unique and unexpected antagonists and plot changes- the silver lining of this book. The thing about this book that I really appreciate is the presence of intrigue and calculations on what could have happened and why things happen. A sort of human behavior prediction. Cons: It is hard to call the style as outstanding, not to mention triggering curiosity is rather hard in beginning chapters. Character could be more developed, there is a lot of wasted potential, especially with what happened to bell, whilst the unexpectedness is quite entertaining, I see an ark wasted. Also, the dialogues make it hard to immerse fully as they sound as though taken from a modern setting and a bit bland or too explanatory. Another thing that turned me off, was how easy the character gained points. There should be a more gripping, heart throbbing journey. Maybe because it’s the beginning, I can’t seem to get excited. Additionally, other than the mc journey being too easy is the lack of any sort of moral compass. I can’t see the difference between the mc and scum. Adding this after reading chapter 8, but I really cannot see cliff hangers and conflicts get resolved too easily. It’s like the ark ended before it began. Advice : Perhaps, add more flavor to the character such as stoic, lively, cold, passionate, devious, scheming etc. i know it is a character setting on its own but the mc seems bland. And add more conjunctions and sentence structure variation so the readers doesn’t get bored. Stop wasting arks and plot points. Also, this one is probably me, but I am really tired of demon gods.

great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.

Being the first work of the author, I must say I am highly impressed. The world building and character design went beyond my expectations. A very good book to be precise.

Everything about the book is good, i love reading it and the minutes used were not wasted. I’ll encourage everyone who love reading system and cultivation books to read this one[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

To be honest ill be rating this work for various reasons . The first being that this is the Author's first book and yet the story is solid and i didn't find any loopholes till now. The english is decent and not many grammar mistakes exist which really shows how much thought and hard work the author is putting into this novel and he doesnt even have an editor and he isnt even contracted yet. The last point is that this story isnt predictable at all . Keep up the good work and ill be following this work when it gets more chapters.