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I ABSOLUTELY FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY. IF YOU DONT SHUT THE FUCK UP. THANK YOU!! πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Honestly I haven't read the story yet but I saw in the description that there was no romance. The fact that there is no romance and it is stated in the description and guaranteed deserves a five star review in and of itself. The yell of excitement I give when I saw that was hilarious. The amount of times I've had to stop reading a good story because they introduce romance makes me weep. So thank you Author. I dont start a story until at least fifty chapters but for this story I'm going to break that rule. I'll right another review when I catch up with the story.
Pouldrons = Shoulders Placard = Lower Torso/Stomach Vambrace = Forearm/Lower Arm Gauntlet = Hand/Glove Cuisses = Thigh/Upper Leg Sabatons = Boots/Feet
more*?
pituitary gland = a small pea-sized gland that plays a major role in regulating vital body functions and general wellbeing.
you dont need quotation marks after every sentence
most likely or take out the most and have it just be probably
Is agitated the right word for here? Why is he troubled or anxious over the mounds of gold? Do you mean to say hes excited?
livid mean extremely angry. how can the MC be extremely angry with happiness? the word livid doesnt fit here.
was a huge staircase *
Vitriol = cruel and bitter criticism
Palisade Wall - A palisade, sometimes called a stakewall or a paling, is typically a fence or defensive wall made from iron or wooden stakes, or tree trunks, and used as a defensive structure or enclosure.
, even he could feel the aura coming off these people, off instead of of
cadaverous = resembling a corpse in being very pale, thin, or bony.