Item: Lord of Chaos.
Rating: 5
Author: Lemn

LemnAuthor2yr

2022-10-03 17:41

Hello, I am the author. The rhythm of the novel starts a bit slow, but then it picks up and I think it becomes exciting. I have tried to make the characters vivid and believable. I don't like to create a villain who is simply evil and idiotic, nor an MC like that. I focus quite a bit on the characters and their emotions, so there will be several characters who have emotions and thoughts that can be seen in the novel. I think there are many exciting and a bit strange elements (For example, different layers of the system, which can connect with other users, and exotic powers of different people like a necromancer who uses teleportation magic). The world is wide and I try to bring it to life, showing different events in the work, for example descriptions of scenes that happen in other places in the world or universe.

Lord of Chaos.

Lemn

4.9

203 Chs

Liked by 2 people

Replies7

Homelander69Lv13

is mc is going to evil

2yr

LemnAuthor

The protagonist will not be evil, in fact, he tries in his own way to be "good", maybe he is not the ideal example of a "good" being, he is selfish but doesn’t want to do anything really immoral.

Homelander69:is mc is going to evil

2yr

haremphobicLv15

The whole story is 3rd person

2yr

LemnAuthor

No, there are a lot of dialogues and thoughts in first person, but there are many descriptions as well.

haremphobic:The whole story is 3rd person

2yr

yuchen_zhang_5379Lv1

Hi! My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!

1yr

John_Johnson_0467Lv1

I recently found out it's good to avoid asking if MC is evil; few authors will outright say yes. So I'm asking: Does he have anything in common with Noah (Birth of the demonic sword), Leylin (Warlock in the Magus world), or Konrad (Profane prince of domination)?

Lemn: The protagonist will not be evil, in fact, he tries in his own way to be "good", maybe he is not the ideal example of a "good" being, he is selfish but doesn’t want to do anything really immoral.

1yr

John_Johnson_0467Lv1

Also, are you by chance Romanian?

Lemn: The protagonist will not be evil, in fact, he tries in his own way to be "good", maybe he is not the ideal example of a "good" being, he is selfish but doesn’t want to do anything really immoral.

1yr

Other Reviews

LemnAuthor

You can ask questions here, there may be some discreet spoilers in the answers, so read this only if you think it will not ruin your reading experience. In the other review posted by me, there are also answers that could have spoilers, beware.

2yr

iwo835Lv2

Great story, the start was perfect and you describe the world in which they are living well. I have nothing bad to point out in your novel, your grammar and punctuation are good which is important for a novel. Would recommend this to everyone who likes system novels.

2yr

Withe_ReaperLv2

I really liked the story, I got the idea that the story was a mix between fantasy and science fiction, I hope I can read more chapters, so keep doing what you are doing

2yr

PerkyPompous_PixieLv4

Definitely love the world background and the story development as the chapter goes on. And as for the MC, at least he's got some determination to push through with what life throws at him.

2yr

GMSJakersLv1

The writing works well and the development of the story works quite well. The world-building would be a bit more described but other than that, it's quite good.

2yr

MasterKompanyeroLv1

the plot is very loved it, the characters especially to the main characters are admiring and I continue to read it by the way I like the synopsis. its very interesting.

2yr

Violet_IvoryLv3

Nice, you write well without showing too many mistakes in grammar or punctuation. i like the way youre taking this on the characters. i too am not a fan of 1 dimensional villains or characters that simply have one quirk that defines their whole persona. The world could be described more intricately but i believe youve done a good job. keep writing ✍️

2yr

LittleYellowTurtleLv10

Really unique power system and anarchy world. It is very exciting to read what will happen next as it is always something new and unexpected, I recommend it!

2yr

Account_nolongerLv1

I liked everything about the story, it is pretty good with descriptions and definitely exciting, Kudos to the author. I am gonna read this till the end and wish to see more spicy content in the upcoming chapters ❤️❤️❤️

2yr

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