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Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv41yr
2023-06-29 12:14

Cons: 1. The writing or rather translation here is quite clunky and author or translator sometimes forget the facts that they have established as times go on. 2. Mc used be quite low key and cautious but after the 400th chapter, there is 180 change in his personality, becoming a flamboyant, blood thirsty and radical person which is quite a jarring and sudden change. 3. The ending is quite abrupt as well, there is way more to the world and plot which were setup earlier, however we don't see any of them. worse of all is that by the time the story ends the mc isn't even that strong in his own world, so kinda disappointed because of that as well. overall if you can turn off ur brain to the translation issue and occasional logic breakdown, u might enjoy this since this is main a slice of life, cultivation, mystery and fantasy in the first 400 chapters.

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TagDaReaper
TagDaReaperLv5

Ending? It hasn't ended yet. It just isnt being translated more.

Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv4

nope there is already an after note by author, u can go check the raw as well if you want to make sure. this novel is finished.

TagDaReaper:Ending? It hasn't ended yet. It just isnt being translated more.
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