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EsZeus
EsZeusLv152yr
2023-02-02 03:26

Overall... Typical badly translated chinese novel. Names are getting swapped every few paragraphs, suddenly new names that were not translated are coming up in chinese, then it switches back to the english ones. Names of people are getting constantly swaped around. The thoughts are strange, the grammar is weird, talks and thoughts are flat, characters are edgy and unpolished. This novel is a prime example, once again, how webnovel just pushes chinese novels to the front with 5* ratings. The ratings and reviews are not honest and all more scam than real. What a sad life we are living... Well, I can only suggsst not reading it and wasting time. [img=faceslap]

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Mute
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It's badly edited machine translated, that's all lonelytree is capable of doing, he actually admitted that is what he was hired for.

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