Thanks for the review. However, you should get your facts straight before giving spoiler review. It was Amaterasu who came looking for problems with Apollo, not the other way around. I mentioned it quite clearly. You would have noticed it if you actually seriously read it before giving this review.

yes it is true that amaterasu is looking for of problem , but it was not very mature for him to be the enemy of almost an entire Pantheon and know that it's not logical given his current strength to do this too early and immature (too much risk just to satisfy his pride). I hope my review will help you improve your work to another level

Your confidence sure is something

thanks for the compliment

so the author is to blame for your ignorance? go read a book or study mythology if you want to have a better immersion experience. this kind of comment is exactly what discourages most of the good authors in this site. you criticize him/her for actually doing his/her job right by applying his/her fair amount knowledge to the fic just because you lack knowledge of it??

you know your comment is pointless? since a criticism allows the author to understand these faults to improve them and to know these strong points to change nothing or make them even better, In short my criticism is objective and precise for that he gives more explanations to the reader who are weak in mythology or who don't know much about the Genesis of Marvel and Dc . so I would really advise you not to criticize the opinions of others without being objective and neutral in your remarks since in your comment you are neither objective nor neutral there I just see a hurt fan😏

The story is based on a mythological character so I would expect there to be lots of mythological facts it’s the main reason I read it

Nah. I didn't say you can't cricitize. I encourage criticism, but only on the appropriate things that need to be criticized. All your previous point on the previous comment were on poin to me except on the part where you criticized the author for actually doing good on applying his/her knowledge on the fic. In the first place, why would you even read a fanfic about certain stories when you are not that knowledgeable about it?? Even if you would still want to read it, every information is just a google away? It doesn't have to be always the authors fault.

Personally I read it at the beginning just since this is a Marvel fanfic with some element from Dc (I think it would be interesting), but I didn't expect there to be little explanation on certain details of the mythology (I do some research to avoid not understanding certain chapters) In short: I find that this an incredible fanfic with a beautiful style of writing and an incredible construction of the world but which has some small gap which makes it frustrating to the reader (the reader like me without much knowledge of mythology and with a weak knowedge of the Genesis of Marvel and Dc)🥱

Now I understand your words and you're not wrong, but I findt it tiring to go back and forth several times on Google (maybe it's my lazy side), but I find it a shame that the story loses some quality for the lack of details that bother some readers (or so I'm just too used to some authors who give too many details about the universes where the adventures of their Mc take place) but in any case these are problems in this fanfic that do not make not the easiest reading (the author can take my opinion or leave it)

giving this story a 3 star review, you must hate your life.

you should stop talking to say nothing and find arguments to prove that my criticism is unjustified (since you are really not Neutral there)

and look properly it's not 3 stars since i'm giving 2.5 stars , it is cool no?

from you point , i should be scientist my self to read any book related to science, or i should be detective myself and have knowledge about investigation stuff to read sherlock holmes or any detective book to be exact. Man dnt be a simp.

Yo Author is this a single fml romance? cuz I'm not reading if it's not so it would be nice to know.

your comment show that you haven't read this fanfic or that you haven't read all the comments in this review🤨. So I'm going to say it again in a simple way so that you understand. the author does not explain certain fait mythology (such as the divinity of certain mythological character and a small glimpse of their history in the mythology of the genre, their exploit or crime and he does not explain where certain characters of this era of Marvel ). in short there are things that don't facilitate the reading for a novice in mythology and the author does not try to help people who are left behind (and I am too lazy to study mythology for read a fanfic) . so I hope you understand that your comments really have no place here since my words only show shortcomings in this fanfic which must be improved to push this fanfic to another level

This isn't constructive critism that's just critism you didn't offer anything to help make it better. You pretty much just insulted him and when he responded while not mature to insult you back you can't really say anything. I do hope you know Apollo is a very childish god as he was stated in mythology he isn't very mature and a very selfish god overall. Anyway back to the original point your critism wan't very helpful.

How exactly wasn't his criticism helpful? he pointed out flaws in the authors writing the author himself agreed with him about those flaws and the only thing he disagreed with was Apollo starting problems with Amatarasu the author himself saw it as helpful criticism wether it was constructive criticism or not doesn't really matter :/