Review Detail of Kage_n0_Ou in Surviving in my Own Unpublished Failed Novel
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This novel could've been better but the MC plays a extremely minor role in the story's progression. Kinda like that one dwarf that isekai MCs always visit to upgrade their gear; he's important but not too much. The story at times has a lot of unnecessary information like there's this one scene where the teacher does a roll call and rather than just mention the important names and maybe a few others, while skipping the rest, the author goes through the hassle of thinking up a bunch of names for people who have absolutely zero impact on the story. It also keeps hinting at the fact that there's something special about the MC but then proceeds to delegate him to the background rather than unraveling the mystery. His role is just to eat with his sister and mention some random facts. He's boring and also has no personality. I read up till ch. 89 and can't say whether or not the story improves later on so I can't really recommend. Try it and see for yourself
Surviving in my Own Unpublished Failed Novel
False_Architect
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I hope I didn't come across as too harsh. I respect your creative effort; there's no way it's easy to write an interesting story
False_Architect:Thank you for the review, Reader! :D
You didn't. In fact, I appreciate it. As a new writer, these reviews, whether good or bad, would help me to do better in the long way. So, worry not.
Kage_n0_Ou:I hope I didn't come across as too harsh. I respect your creative effort; there's no way it's easy to write an interesting story
where unnecessary talk is less. mc has a brain. mc, if you write a novel that moves with his brain. mc whose mentality is not garbage.It would be a better novel.
False_Architect:You didn't. In fact, I appreciate it. As a new writer, these reviews, whether good or bad, would help me to do better in the long way. So, worry not.