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Fletcher_Isakson
Fletcher_IsaksonLv17mth
2024-07-01 08:35

For me overall 9/10 the only thing dragging it down is the extreme detail put into every chapter about things that we already know because this is a fan fiction not an actual new novel cuz everyone reading this has watched/read Naruto already so we don't need that extreme detail to know about the world that we already know it gets so bad that I have to skip paragraphs or even full chapters because they're just so much

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Fletcher_Isakson
Fletcher_IsaksonLv1

And to be 100% honest if the author of the fanfic would actually trim all the extra useless information in the chapters and I swear to God the amount of chapters would be cut in half that's how much extra information in there. And I'm not even joking roughly about every 3 to 4 chapters I legitimately skip a chapter after skim reading it cuz nothing happens

OldDaoistTruly
OldDaoistTrulyLv14

did it get better for later chapters? i kinda cant be bothered to read it, finding it annoying.

Fletcher_Isakson:And to be 100% honest if the author of the fanfic would actually trim all the extra useless information in the chapters and I swear to God the amount of chapters would be cut in half that's how much extra information in there. And I'm not even joking roughly about every 3 to 4 chapters I legitimately skip a chapter after skim reading it cuz nothing happens
unknown_daoist
unknown_daoistLv14

i mean he grammatically edits the chapters with AI (which is totally fine), but i know chatgpt and it likes to add as much as it can at any given moment😂 I once wanted a simple look above my email (1 paragraoh, 4 sentences) for any mistakes on what it would do bettern it gabe me a 4-5 paragraph text💀

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