Fletcher_Isakson

The whole concept and storyline is pretty dang good and honestly speaking I don't mind if the chapters are really short just cut off all the unnecessary bits which is about like 40% of each chapter then I might actually come back and restart but until then I'm going to abandon this one

The writing quality isn't anything to write home about there are a couple areas on misgendering going in between him and she on the same character multiple times but I can get past that and I know this is supposed to be a slow burner but how the hell is the MC still in the academy after 100 chapters like that's just ridiculous another problem I generally have no problem with fanfiction that are slow burners as long as the fic has a couple hundred chapters but the main reason why I generally don't stick around that long is because half the time the author's dropped the fanfiction before it ever gets good and I generally speaking I hate it whenever the MC always tries to lay low to not show off because 90% of fanfiction mc have no reason to do so but in this one I will let it slide because he's in the hidden mist

Another thing that kind of annoys me is on how the author and all the other characters around the MC makes him look and act like a pervert like all the damn time even though the MC has not shown any actions or traits of doing so. And if the MC is such a big pervert whenever any girl actually offers themselves to him which has happened multiple times he always turns them down which just reinforces the fact that he is not a pervert even though all the other characters thinks he is it just really gets on my nerves like if you're a pervert actually be a pervert that's fine I don't give a crap but don't call a character a pervert even though they have done nothing to earn the insult

Well I feel like the writing quality and the plot is pretty good and the fight scenes are amazing. But the whole power system levels and evolution needs to be more flushed out and detailed cuz anytime the MC gets a new summon or his pre-existing pets get a new ability the author never lets us know about it until the middle of the fight making it feel like the MC pull it out of his ass mid to fight which to me feels more of plot armor than anything else and I admit that the MC is a good tactician and making up plans on the fly in the middle of battle and I do also admit that the MC deductive skills are pretty good but the way the author likes to set up surprise abilities and equipment/weapons and doesn't let us know what the MC is planning beforehand before it actually happens makes it feel like the MC is terrible at long-term planning. And I believe this is more of a problem on how the author likes the right the stories and leave suspense on with the MC is doing or planning all it does is make me think that the author and the MC is making random crap up as they goes

But that's the problem though when I started reading the fic there wasn't anything in the synopsis about DC and it also wasn't in the tags either

Oh and one more thing but this is basically me just nitpicking but I don't know how the author did it but for some reason this fanfiction feels like the pacing is too slow and too fast at the same like I believe the plot should be faster but the power progression of the MC should be slower. I mean don't get me wrong I don't mind a fast-paced or a slow burner fanfiction but whenever the plot progression in the power scaling aren't in sync it either feels like the MC is way too overpowered for the situation or way to under power to where the MC has to come up with some bull crap forced plot plan out of his ass to win

The writing quality is pretty good so I don't really blame the translator for the low review but there are quite a few inconsistencies when it comes to the MC and his powers and the world around him. Another thing that annoys me is that every once in awhile I read one chapter just to move to the next just for me to be confused cuz it feels like there's a missing chapter in between the two because a whole bunch of stuff has happened in between the two chapters that we either don't get an explanation of what happened or we do get one but it's so poorly explained it leaves me scratching my head

Any plan that gives a potential enemy a unnecessary amount of power without having power himself to back it up is a flawed plan that 90% of the time has to rely on forced plot AKA plot armor for the plan to succeed especially considering that the MC isn't the smartest character of the bunch I mean he's far from brainless but it kind of just feels like he pulled the plan out of his ass and expected it to work in which it did but it felt forced

Honestly it's very mid I hate the fact that there has been proven evidence of the MC does not have vision in his eyes in that they have basically been completely destroyed only for everyone to think that is power comes from his already destroyed eyes which makes absolutely no sense and it pisses me off and if the translation quality wasn't decent I would actually make this a one star

Very middle of the road fanfiction I personally can get past the grammar I don't mind it as much but it's just your average reincarnated into a child with the mind of an adult getting attracted to another child which is actually pretty damn common for fanfics as disgusting as it is and also what is the point of the MC having knowledge of the future and a Canon if he's not going to do anything or change it at that point just reincarnate your MC with no memories of there past life. Literally the only reason why I kept reading is because of his power