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SugarGodno1
SugarGodno1Lv46mth
2024-04-23 19:26

Does the mc get an upgraded Byakugan ?

A Transmigrator's Story in the Hyuga's Main Branch

Hanma_Jack
4.7
127 Chs

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HyperMan07
HyperMan07Lv4

There’s no upgraded byakugan. There’s tenseigan but mc would have to awaken it on his own but the author here seems like the type of guy to not meaninglessly give op powers to the mc

4mth
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SugarGodno1
SugarGodno1Lv4

Its a fanfic . He can make stuff up u know

HyperMan07:There’s no upgraded byakugan. There’s tenseigan but mc would have to awaken it on his own but the author here seems like the type of guy to not meaninglessly give op powers to the mc
4mth
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HyperMan07
HyperMan07Lv4

But if there’s no reasonable explanation behind it. It’s just a trash fic

SugarGodno1:Its a fanfic . He can make stuff up u know
4mth
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SugarGodno1
SugarGodno1Lv4

Its not hard to imagine a byakugan having an upgrade just like Mangakyo sharingan with out breaking readers suspension of disbelief or it being trash. If the story is about hyuga , you have tp explore the possibilities of making an upgrade even if u have to come up with one.

HyperMan07:But if there’s no reasonable explanation behind it. It’s just a trash fic
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HyperMan07
HyperMan07Lv4

Well. That’s exactly why I said there should be a reasonable explanation if byakugan was indeed upgraded

SugarGodno1:Its not hard to imagine a byakugan having an upgrade just like Mangakyo sharingan with out breaking readers suspension of disbelief or it being trash. If the story is about hyuga , you have tp explore the possibilities of making an upgrade even if u have to come up with one.
3mth
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Luizz_Ricardo
Luizz_RicardoLv10

author if the MC really wants to be strong and protect himself he has to be at the level of kaguya's children, so he can catch beasts with tails and cells from hashirama, tenseigan

7mth

Fletcher_Isakson
Fletcher_IsaksonLv1

For me overall 9/10 the only thing dragging it down is the extreme detail put into every chapter about things that we already know because this is a fan fiction not an actual new novel cuz everyone reading this has watched/read Naruto already so we don't need that extreme detail to know about the world that we already know it gets so bad that I have to skip paragraphs or even full chapters because they're just so much

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Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

So far it's been a great Naruto World building fanfiction and I can see the author is trying to make a very logical fanfiction. But, 30 chapters in and he's still explain the intricacies of the Hugo Clan so not much can be said...🤷‍♂️ It's well written though, and it's not as boring as you might think 🤔

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Everton_Vale_0216
Everton_Vale_0216Lv4

the atmosphere of the work is great, MC anti selfish hero. a different view of the clan's internal politics. A big defect is the prolixity, it can be very inconvenient. explanation of the Byakugan's abilities repeatedly, events that occurred just a few chapters ago. I recommend the Author review with AI or consider that many readers will read the work in the future. I hope the reading doesn't get tiring for them and for you to continue. great fanfiction.

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Leatzy
LeatzyLv1

OFFICIAL REVIEW: (100 chapters read) Hi, here's my review on this series. The strength of this series is the political construction within the village and the clan of the protagonist with the author who managed to create intriguing patterns between the various factions. Good grammar. CONS: - Problems with writing, the author adds, in my opinion, too many useless descriptions, repeating the same thing many times, only in a different key, moving on to redundant chapters of this element. -Lack of action and characterization, In 100 chapters the element that is missing a lot is the action, with few fights and often very short. The author justifies this with the status of the protagonist, which I find ridiculous. Another negative element is the characterisation of the characters, given the actual lack of dialogue of the protagonist with the various characters, which makes everything a little soulless. OVERALL: I think the series is good from some points of view, but it is often heavy

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Rkwhi2
Rkwhi2Lv4

I have to say for a Hyugaa transmigration fanfic this is amazing. I love the approach of being careful and cautious especially with the Hyugaa and the fact the can really read people this was done extremely well. I can’t wait to read more I’m about half way done with the current chapters which are out at this time(I’m just starting the chapter 37) and the total chapter out is 74. I really hope this fanfic gets finished this fanfic is too good to drop.

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MMEStudio
MMEStudioLv4

Brother I have just finished your neji fanfic and I liked verymuch but I felt it's too rushed to be honest I see that you aren't making the same mistake here I hope that this new mc and I hope that u will show a humane side like neji in the latter part of the ur last novel plus romance and i will be very grateful not rushed one like the last novel plus more chapter I think it would be better if u followed the canon with some changes but not super big

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Eins_olgon
Eins_olgonLv1

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Amomon
AmomonLv14

Goodluck in writing this novel! Word of advice is limit yourself to post just one chap and bonus chap to make sure you have stockpiled chapters

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