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livingandreadingLv122yr
2022-09-20 21:22

Great story. I mean it feels very real according to the tone it was set. The story twists are unexpected but you will still like to read them. The characters are realistic and they have their own strengths and weaknesses. The plot is really set with a good premise I feel like reading more to know what happens next. Author, you did a really good job.

Queen Of Slaves

SoniiNaaz
4.6
5 Chs

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demi22
demi22Lv2

this is a nice book but I also recommend alpha's desire am the author of the book I started releasing it today but I will be releasing two chapters per day and would update everyday

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livingandreading
livingandreadingLv12

Sure but you could post this in the forum on review swap and promotion threads.

demi22:this is a nice book but I also recommend alpha's desire am the author of the book I started releasing it today but I will be releasing two chapters per day and would update everyday
2yr
demi22
demi22Lv2

ok

2yr
demi22
demi22Lv2

where is the forum pls am new here

2yr
livingandreading
livingandreadingLv12

In the app, go to profile and scroll down. Yo will see it.

demi22:where is the forum pls am new here
2yr
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demi22
demi22Lv2

😊 thanks

2yr
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SoniiNaaz
SoniiNaazAuthor

what is the name of your book?

demi22:this is a nice book but I also recommend alpha's desire am the author of the book I started releasing it today but I will be releasing two chapters per day and would update everyday
2yr
demi22
demi22Lv2

alpha's desire and everyone run for your life

2yr
SoniiNaaz
SoniiNaazAuthor

Thanks dear friends 😍 have a good day

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