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I am happy that you feel the story is good. Because when I write daily, sometimes, it feels like I'm writing and not assessing it correctly. In the starting when readers wwew commenting, I changed some parts depending on their questions but now, I keep adding what feels okay to me. I'm hoping to finish all my books in the next month and then see if any reader gives feedback! Anyway, how are you? Sorry for replying so late!
Finally, when I rearead and check grammar, it's not glitching and it's making sense now, haha. Also, this book got more attention than TBMS, it was surprising. I'm planning to keep it short and end it with 120 chapters.
Awesome. I'd love to read it. You wrote 16 chapters already. That's fast! And thank you so much for always supporting me :)
No, she was interested in "What kind of coincidences" he was referring to!
Yes, let me check again, I've been rereading and editing. Sometimes, I miss out details. Thank you so much for your kind words. I've been getting some reviews saying it's confusing and all, I've been pretty much down but your words make me so happy. Thank you so much for reading.
Thank you! I'm editing and updating! Some readers pointed out that it wasn't easy to read . BTW, how's your writing going?
I'll write it again making some changes. But Jamie and Leo thought he was fighting using the lighter. They didn't realize that he had gained fire power then. They just thought he was somehow manipulating fire using the lighter. Only after this incident, he was sure that Jamie's objects were giving them superpowers. I'll edit it so there's no confusion! Thank you for pointing it out :)
He wasn't telling it loud!
Thank you for telling me. I'll edit it and make it less confusing :) Thank you so much for reading! If there are any more issues, please tell me, I'll change them!
I edited the ones you pointed. Thank you so much:) And thank you for reading and commenting. It makes me really happy, and motivates me :)
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