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because maybe it is real?

as much as I hate the hyperbole in this novel, famous and capable people coming into his territory absolutely makes sense. He only get to recruit them only because it's a reward from the suprem will ( legendary rating ), so no, they didn't just happen to pass by and decided that they want to stay in mc's city. only by doing something worthy does the mc get to recruit them, it's the same as every character in this novel, if they got the reward ( legendary rating 1) , they will absolutely got to recruit one capable person.the amount of famous old man/ women in his territory is linear with how many legendary rating 1 he had

read up to ch 49 , great world building, great writing too, the only downside O think is the character, they feel bland? especially the mc, he got more edgy as the story progres ( my subjective opinion), but yeah I rarely have any problem with the mc in this site, but this one is just boring, another downside is that when he came to pesia, everything got to easy for him, I miss the challange and hardship before he came to pesia. but despite all that, amazing world building with endless potential, the power system ever expanding, and the story is anything but flat

is appointed companion active all the time? if it is, isn't it a bit too op? I mean Kane get every single skill including the exclusive skill that Cain get after he get to lv 100. that is just broken

the problem isn't he being too weak, too naive or too young, the problem is how frustating the MC is. and NO, your justification about him being a 15 year old boy isn't the cause of it, i've read MC that is weaker, younger, and possibly more naive than your MC but they aren't frustating to read What make your MC so frustating is that most of the time his action is so forced, possibly the most forced i've read in this site, some may feel they are completely natural, but no, what make it so frustating is that some time the MC action is meant to torture him, I DON'T KNOW WHY , but i blame the author for this one, his action came in the worst possible reaction sometimes and if it just one or two time then it's fine, but that happen way too often, so often it become the MC trait and i've read your other novel comment section saying the same " the MC makes it hard to read this " thing, so maybe it isn't the MC trait but the author trait lol i really get the impression that the author is doing that on purpose , so that the MC can have a character development, but character development doesn't have to feel so frustating and forced, if it does, than it's just bad writing, because Honestly your other ( teenage ) side characters in this novel develop just fine, and i dont feel even a tiny bit of frustation reading them, and that tells a lot sorry for my poor english

bro you tripping? what part of the story did you skip to make a conclusion of " him being a Reincarnator of grandmaster scholar doesnt change anything"? like did we even read the same story? example of how him being a grandmaster in the past literally influences everything in his second life: first, in the very first few chapters we were shown that he uses one of his best discovery " spellcraft" to kill the assasin, if not for him being a grand scholar, he wouldn't even survive the first month of his secong life as a baby second, him nof advancing after white core is actually on purpose, his discovery in his first life states that he can creater multiple core, IF, I'D SAY IT AGAIN, IF, his first core remain white, so yeah, he wouldn't have known any of that if he wasn't a scholar in his first life, so no, he wont be the same if he's not a grand scholar in his first life and you protesting that the MC have it all too easy, and also protesting that he's not the most powerful/best student in his school is very contradictive lol, you want him to struggle but when he's actually struggling you're making a fuss about it, and yes he's a scholar, so if we're talking about Knowledge, no one beats him in that school, but if were talking about magic power, which is influenced by many thing , knowledge is of course included, but thats not all magic power is about, there's "talent", which the MC lack by having so little mana in his second life, barely passing as a mage, so him being not the most powerful in the school (yet atleast, because even MC body as a teenager has a limitation ) makes so much sense in the latter chapter, and the MC having shortcut .... bro he's literally a Reincarnator of a grand scholar of course for the 100-150 ch everything is gonna be easy for him, the point of him being a Reincarnator (redo) is suppose to make his life easier and gain All the advantage that he didn't get in his first life, but in the latter chapter he'll get quite of worthy opponent, so dont worry

the mc need more flaws lol, sometimes half of the chapter is about how other people talking about how the MC is a genius, smart, etc... i mean that's one of the essence in this site, but this is just too much lol

which ch did he turned the monster to card that he didn't kill? the pronounce thing is a bit Confusing but it disappear in later ch, 100+ maybe? i don't remembet exactly, but in the beginner ch, the writing were quite confusing, the way the auhtor describe a situation is a bit weird, but it got a lot better, especially in the beginning of the school competition character development is the worst? lol I strongly disagree with that one, how come? if you continue reading, character development is actually one of the strong point in this novel lol, of course i'm not talking about the earlier chapter lmao you said that the MC is smarter than everyone? not really, he is smart, cunning, but not that smart in the earlier chapter, thats why he got defeated by his opponent, you're a bit contradicting yourself saying like you don't like other character being weaker and dumber than the MC, but you hate the fact that the MC got defeated, lmao and no, the trickery in this novel is basically fighting strategy so basically everyone does that , yes that includes the opponent that defeats him, ( the ice magician girl) , it'll be weird if the MC actually manage to defeats her team, like he only started getting Into real fighting not too long ago( after blessing), and the opponent is literally a 3rd class, 2 year older than him and has been training with magic since shes young, so obviously she has more experiences, thats why MC losing to her is actually important because MC has only been fighting monster, an instinc drived creature, not human that can actually think and use trickery just like MC, so MC trickery on fighting another human ( at that time ) is so strighforwad it looked dumb. but yeah about the girl being the strongest is a bit cliche but it doesn't really matter in the long run , the girl actually have a character, not just someone being strong and yes the " still follow MC lead" is a bit weird although the other want to train him ( give more experience) but it also makes sense, if you think even the 3rd year cant fully predict his trickery ( although he failed miserably) , that shows the extent of his brain he just need more experience, and he'll be a beast excuse my english, just trying to share my opinion

an actual story*

100% true, if feels like nothing is important anymore, the characters in the first wolrd are now a mere ant, so are the characters in the second world , and the transision is too fast, the skill that use to be godly now feels like nothing , so everything the MC has now, will be nothing in the next 100 chap, it feels nice at fist, but if you continue a bit further . .. .. .. .. you know, a lot of cultivation novel has this lower world bullshit too, but the progress isn't as fast as this one, the MC will be in your World this very chap, in 100 chap later he will be a god in your World, the author keep repeating the same thing over and over without and actual story, i tried so hard not to drop it but i just cant