Cara, vi em algum capítulo que você é brasileiro, então resolvi escrever em português mesmo. Gosto muito da sua história, tem muito potencial e segue uma linha de raciocínio relativamente crível, diferente de muitas histórias de realização de desejos que são ridiculamente intragáveis de ler, então parabéns por isso! Após essa nova atualização da Webnovel eu e mais diversos usuários não conseguimos mais ler (eu utilizava o Google tradutor) então gostaria de sugerir que você cogitasse postar em outro site, se você decidir fazer isso não deixe de avisar, caso não possa ou queira, desejo tudo de bom no desenvolvimento da sua história. Um abraço do seu compatriota Monge_BR.

The author here being shameless and reviewing his own work. Gotta represent , folks pls review this to give me de motivation to write this Fic, and give me tips and ideas.

its ok if you like a story with a mc that will lose over and over the only good fight is against nomu sad that it went that way but what can you do.[img=faceslap]

Grammar is so bad, it’s not even funny. I pushed though 7 chapters, everything else is mid but I can’t read this mess. This needs heavy editing.

It is clear the author thinks and researches multiple sources before moving on to the next subject in their novel. Watching the MC develop their body, mind, and martial arts with hints of inspiration from their previous life is absolutely wonderful. It is a breath of fresh air reading about someone struggling to get to the top without some cliche system to spoon feed themselves.

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i usually dont write reviews but this fanfic is really good one. MC s mentality is white good and admirable his quirk is not op also a good quality in a fanfic which leaves place for both his growth and character developments so i think this fanfic is one of the hidden treasures of this website

One of the best, if not the best, MHA fanfic I have seen on this site. The author brings an excellent idea, and is knowing how to apply it, the MC doesn't depend so much on his quirk, and it's not a quirk that AFO would want, and even if he loses his quirk he won't lose much of his strength. I just think he should show other characters' point of view, about certain situations more often. Other than that, this is an excellent novel, and one that I highly recommend reading. Besides being one of the few great writers on this site. #BRASIL

Pretty good story. My only problem is that when I see the face of the Ogre I cannot imagine a hero, all I can see is a monster who does whatever the heck he wants.