The author here being shameless and reviewing his own work. Gotta represent , folks pls review this to give me de motivation to write this Fic, and give me tips and ideas.
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My question is whether his martial arts are an “art” or a supernatural technique. This is important due to the quirks that exist and the capability of the mc in fighting them. For example, there already exists a martial artist, the tail guy. In the first hero training, he got his feet frozen by ice. A single move and he tears his skin off. If the mc is like him, he frankly doesn’t stand a chance. A power of sorts is needed to stand a chance in this world. Especially so when there are people that use martial arts with their quirk.
that my friend is where I disagree. Sekizan uses only martial arts, and his quirk is only a tool to facilitate the facility of how he can learn a move. the tail guy you use as an example is a poor example in this case because his degree of mastery and conditioning is insufficient compared with the mc currently. The thought that a person cannot contend with absolute power with just technique is wrong in my mind. I originally created this fanfiction because I was sick and tired of all the fics showing their protagonist only relying on the power given to them by their quirk to become strong. we as people of this world have countless examples of people in fiction that rely on hard work and martial arts to contend with adversity, garou being tho one that immediately come to mind. I hope that I answered your doubts, and hope you enjoy my work with a open mind from now on.
Is there going to be romance?
who knows, let the flow of the story guide us my friend.
Got it. I’ll give it a try.
Whatever u do dont make it harem as in only one fml
well I disagree on how technique alone can beat power without using more or less the same amount of power It's so unrealistic that martial artist can beat the likes of Allmight or Endeavor or AFO Garou's world is a world where humans physical limits can be broken , it's like Fruit Awakening in One piece And this fanfic takes place on MHA where Quirks are actually important and Quickless(without using power from another anime) story/fanfic is always full of bs to justify how they beat superpowered individuals and it's MC is usually have the almost close to Batman's level of plot armor
Fair warning there are annoying keyboard warrior wannabes who give 1 star reviews for people who give themselves 5 star reviews for the sake of "evening it out". P.s. I have yet to start reading but this looks interesting and I would give 5 stars but the option to leave a review constantly breaks for me so I'm leaving this comment here in the off chance the review button hates me.
I have finished reading it all and I say it deserves 6 stars out of 5. On another note you could have the mc break mortal limit and become a god/demon god of combat and judgement if you feel like the "monster" got off too easily. (Demon god for a bit of a nod to Yujiro's demon back technique but instead as whole body Demonic embodiment)
Pls tell me he wont be dekus friend/babysitter
what happened author? You haven't updated the series in quite a while. Have you given up on it? (Hope I didn't jinx it...)
man, it's sad to see the lack of motivation and enthusiasm I've been rolling out lately. I can't put pen to paper unfortunately, however I didn't give up on this story. I hope that I can write it again later.
