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You know, I could read this if I were 16 years old. The main character is stupid, his character jumps from side to side, sometimes he speaks like a normal person in his position, and sometimes like a complete simp. At my age (30), this work does not appeal to me at all. Lots of logical errors, not to mention other stupid things. If you are under 18 years old, as I am sure the author of this work is, please. If you are older, it is better not to start.

Before you start reading, I'll warn you - the main character is a small Asian woman. And after rebirth, the hero will have both male and female characteristics.

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Another Chinese master. A lot of terrible dialogues that are embarrassing. The Chinese raid is everywhere, and the main character is an idiot. You know, okay, he defeated a pirate at the age of 10, whose head was worth 15 million. This is wonderful! But he simply threw away the pirate's body without taking the reward. And so it is everywhere, then the will is visible and everyone knows about it, then the hero simply cripples the pirates, instead of killing them. The translation is good, the production is rubbish.

t's pretty boring. I read 150 chapters and was dissatisfied. Of these 150 chapters, only about 20 were solid, everything else was just water or digressions of minor characters. The plot seems to be frozen in place, nothing interesting happens. The main character doesn't even kill those who attack him. The main character is kind of a pussy, ugh.

Cardboard text with blank characters. There are no emotions, no feelings, no stories. The people in this work are like stupid robots. They don't question, feel, or interact. The main character is the same. I won’t talk about dozens of other disadvantages, because that’s already enough. Just imagine the average dialogue in this story: Heroine (A) greets Heroine (B) = eternal friendship and strong relationship. There is no dialogue, no recognition, nothing. As if the text was written not by a person, but by a damn GPT CHAT. I don't know why there is such a high rating here. The main character is stupid and flat, the environment is dead. English is not even my 3rd language, but even I see hundreds of logical errors in the text. I don’t recommend this to anyone, even the translation from Chinese would be better than this, ugh!

I am writing via Google Translit. The story itself about the “villain” begins only in chapter 181. Before this, the system simply did not exist. Basically this novel is about a “slice of life”. The novel is good and that's all, there is nothing original or special that would not have been shown by the Chinese brothers. Now let's move on to the disadvantages, and there are quite a few: Our hero is not very smart, but very arrogant. He would have been killed 10 times already if there were no plot armor. Especially his overconfidence when facing those who can score with his flick. A system that makes no sense at all is very annoying: all the bonuses of the system, all the rewards and everything else are completely useless to him and he gives it to his useless harem. Our hero is symp. I don't see any bonuses from the system: physiques can't be acquired by our main character, the villain's points are used for some crap. The biggest disappointment is that even the women next to him are not much weaker than him, despite the fact that our hero has a “super-duper physique.” You need a lot of forced plots that can only be in a book. The same military service for 2.5 years. Sounds cool, but in reality? The heir with hundreds of billions of dollars went to work as a minor military man. It would be nice if he stayed in the world, but he will be out of there within 10 years. Yes, he doesn’t even spoil some of the women next to him, waiting for them to “ripe”. The villain behaves more like the main character. And these constant nerfs and inability to kill the hero.

Chad stopped being Chad and became a Beto bitch. I won't even start reading this, I'll just leave an angry comment here for ruining a story that could have been completed in 2-3 chapters and enjoyed a wonderful aftertaste. It's a good thing the author jumped off the bridge, Beta Bitch-sama.