Review Detail of faucheusestar in One Piece: Dream of Immortality
Review detail
It's a straw hat fic! if you like fanfiction that starts well with a character who has his own adventures. the beginning is good but after she joins luffy I would have liked to know it before not to read it so I put it here for those like me who do not like this type of story
One Piece: Dream of Immortality
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Red_Hawk1:Sadly most OP fic is filled with dog licking MC's who love joining rubberboy than create their own better pirate crew, it makes me sick 🤮
she met straw hat she felt fate make her come with them she tried get awey befor conection get to strong she fails and get dragged along as she stronger than luffy and smarter she advise him and somwhat a mentor role now it was hinted that she want to break the fate thing but we dont know what author have planned
Red_Hawk1:But why? It won't benefit her in any way, but as long as she's happy
If she wants to break fate, the best option is quite easy, get rid of the one producing the said fate, meaning Luffy, kill him not help him
shillbear:she met straw hat she felt fate make her come with them she tried get awey befor conection get to strong she fails and get dragged along as she stronger than luffy and smarter she advise him and somwhat a mentor role now it was hinted that she want to break the fate thing but we dont know what author have planned
you know chinene manhua when somone ovepowered try to kill mc amd then they fail and eventualh mc defet them thats why this novelle is filled with chomese tropes like that
Red_Hawk1:If she wants to break fate, the best option is quite easy, get rid of the one producing the said fate, meaning Luffy, kill him not help him
Oh dear, that's sad, thanks for the warning, and it's pretty obvious Luffy will always win after a few losses, and he won't die, because he's the child of fate.
shillbear:you know chinene manhua when somone ovepowered try to kill mc amd then they fail and eventualh mc defet them thats why this novelle is filled with chomese tropes like that
Red_Hawk1:If she wants to break fate, the best option is quite easy, get rid of the one producing the said fate, meaning Luffy, kill him not help him
Simone007:Why should he kill Luffy? She isn’ t a pyscho, you are pretty weird man.
As a one piece fan, I can't imagine Luffy accepting advise from the MC. It's out of his character IMO.
shillbear:she met straw hat she felt fate make her come with them she tried get awey befor conection get to strong she fails and get dragged along as she stronger than luffy and smarter she advise him and somwhat a mentor role now it was hinted that she want to break the fate thing but we dont know what author have planned
it kinda seems like she started to enjoy her time with him tho and decided to just join in I mean it's not like she would be doing much better on her own and she would probably end up a solo like her dad also Robin is on the crew which is the love interest so
shillbear:she met straw hat she felt fate make her come with them she tried get awey befor conection get to strong she fails and get dragged along as she stronger than luffy and smarter she advise him and somwhat a mentor role now it was hinted that she want to break the fate thing but we dont know what author have planned
I don’t mind Strawhat fics as long as the MC isn’t nerfed solely because Luffy as Captain has to be the strongest. I don’t mind Luffy being the strongest if he trains & works towards it because Luffy has INSANE potentional and it’s very believable that if a MC joins the crew an trains Luffy that he will become VERY VERY strong very quickly.