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free_lifeLv52yr
2022-09-11 02:52

honest opinion, it's a well written story with good character design ( even though I don't like his naivety in easily trusting people I find myself unable to dislike him his character is consistent and well thought of). even thought the FF is quite good, I don't find it in myself to continue reading it 😪 especially after the bird turned into a girl 😑 don't know why the whole story feels a little too pink to me.

Is it Wrong that I Woke Up in Danmachi as the Main Character?

HappyVainGlory
4.3
66 Chs

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IAMGORGEOUS
IAMGORGEOUSLv4

Shame it's Not harem... I want Hephaestus😭😭😭 AHHH!!!!!😭?...........why [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] .... ......

2yr

ShadowMonarch185
ShadowMonarch185Lv3

No harem. Sign me up. Noiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

2yr
Plebston323
Plebston323Lv2

Honest Opinion, this is probably one of the better Danmachi Fanfics I've read. The pacings great, no mistakes grammatically so far, Bell's practically an original character which makes the story more lively, and the characters themselves seem more real than the show. Overall I think this will blow up quickly, keep it up!

2yr
ysg
ysgLv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
LazyMartialSage
LazyMartialSageLv4

I like the story but I think the main character is really a hypocrite he flirts all-day but says he'll only love Hestia which is unreasonable and you nerfed quantum magic so much that it's not a joke

2yr
R0B
R0BLv2

The more I read the more the story becomes a slice of life. At this point nothing new happens in the story. It's boring. The story is not about the mc anymore, it's about his daughter. Dropped.

2yr
BobboLobbo
BobboLobboLv4

Good story. Very good to be fair, the grammar is on point, the story is developing towards a good path but I dropped it. The reason I dropped it is because of one reason but it's a very annoying thing. The reason being, the MC says and gives unnecessary information to others, as in: (spoiler) He told eina how he got stronger using potions to help her, and she'll use that information by giving it to the guild to help other adventurers and our MC doesn't get anything from it. He did this before as well. No benefits, only another illogical headache. Why give this information when an enemy might use this and why do it if you don't get anything out of it? I don't think I'd like to read a story that stresses me out. Anyway, good luck with this story. Bye

2yr
Cleiton_Sena_6677
Cleiton_Sena_6677Lv1

It had a lot of potential but in chapter 15, the story had a first and giant mistake for me that made it seem like a cliché isekai anime, I don't know if it was because of that, but from then on I even lost a lot of desire to continue reading and somehow the story seemed to have dropped in quality by 80%, DISAPPOINTMENT

2yr
gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5

one of the best danmachi fics ever happy it got posted here by author found with a copier which led to real author I never rate 5 in update release unless it is completely finished sooo full marks

2yr
eQzy
eQzyLv1

I started reading, and then I remembered that I had already read it. And I quit because of the unrealistic relationship between the characters and, most importantly... Seriously, the author? Did you bring home a bird from the dungeon, and then she became a human, the daughter of the protagonist, and has the powers of the OP? He literally thinks she's his daughter right after he finds the animal? which?

1yr
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