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Plebston323
Plebston323Lv22yr
2022-09-02 14:48

Honest Opinion, this is probably one of the better Danmachi Fanfics I've read. The pacings great, no mistakes grammatically so far, Bell's practically an original character which makes the story more lively, and the characters themselves seem more real than the show. Overall I think this will blow up quickly, keep it up!

Is it Wrong that I Woke Up in Danmachi as the Main Character?

HappyVainGlory
4.3
66 Chs

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0_0Tang_Sileima33
0_0Tang_Sileima33Lv2

ofc it's happy vain glory

2yr
4
ScorchedMaki
ScorchedMakiLv13

sadly the mc isn't a gigachad harem guy (which is kinda stupid especially in a harem built world)

2yr
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Plebston323
Plebston323Lv2

Well, I think that it only makes it more unique, showing a family man who isn’t gonna chase every tail. Harem world or no I think this guy’s writing more than makes up for personal preference

ScorchedMaki:sadly the mc isn't a gigachad harem guy (which is kinda stupid especially in a harem built world)
2yr
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ScorchedMaki
ScorchedMakiLv13

but that's the thing as a guy even if it ain't obviously we more then often then not if given a chance for to have more chicks we will take it it's why so many people got side pieces even those who say they loyal to one person they are more then likely lying tbr

Plebston323:Well, I think that it only makes it more unique, showing a family man who isn’t gonna chase every tail. Harem world or no I think this guy’s writing more than makes up for personal preference
2yr
8
Plebston323
Plebston323Lv2

Um... what? Kinda scary info right there, I knew there are people who get too greedy or lustful, but more often than not? I've never really encountered that personally, so maybe it's just where you are living because most people I know aren't like that.

ScorchedMaki:but that's the thing as a guy even if it ain't obviously we more then often then not if given a chance for to have more chicks we will take it it's why so many people got side pieces even those who say they loyal to one person they are more then likely lying tbr
2yr
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wolfgod223
wolfgod223Lv14

no offense or anything but it just sounds like you're in a fantasy world that's all rainbows and sunshine because believe it or not a lot of people are like that....

Plebston323:Um... what? Kinda scary info right there, I knew there are people who get too greedy or lustful, but more often than not? I've never really encountered that personally, so maybe it's just where you are living because most people I know aren't like that.
2yr
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Plebston323
Plebston323Lv2

Guess I’m just blessed to live here then, it’s disappointing to know people are like that 😕

wolfgod223:no offense or anything but it just sounds like you're in a fantasy world that's all rainbows and sunshine because believe it or not a lot of people are like that....
2yr
18
Average_Daoist
Average_DaoistLv4

lol

wolfgod223:no offense or anything but it just sounds like you're in a fantasy world that's all rainbows and sunshine because believe it or not a lot of people are like that....
2yr
5
Gilgamos
GilgamosLv14

I’m quite certain that’s common in America but not so much in the uk

wolfgod223:no offense or anything but it just sounds like you're in a fantasy world that's all rainbows and sunshine because believe it or not a lot of people are like that....
2yr
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Gilgamos
GilgamosLv14

At least not those in power like the politicians

Gilgamos:I’m quite certain that’s common in America but not so much in the uk
2yr
4
Jester_Advocate
Jester_AdvocateLv4

true though if you read a single harem in here you probably are gonna die from these braindead authors who is just robots man... why can't people make no harem a tag?

ScorchedMaki:sadly the mc isn't a gigachad harem guy (which is kinda stupid especially in a harem built world)
2yr
8
Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv5

Just gonna ask... This novel is not harem right? Or it's just small one soo it's not mentioned in tags.

Jester_Advocate:true though if you read a single harem in here you probably are gonna die from these braindead authors who is just robots man... why can't people make no harem a tag?
2yr
3
IsekaiLord
IsekaiLordLv4

Maidenless behaivor

ScorchedMaki:but that's the thing as a guy even if it ain't obviously we more then often then not if given a chance for to have more chicks we will take it it's why so many people got side pieces even those who say they loyal to one person they are more then likely lying tbr
2yr
5
yenool_senut
yenool_senutLv4

gigachad?

ScorchedMaki:sadly the mc isn't a gigachad harem guy (which is kinda stupid especially in a harem built world)
2yr
1
ScorchedMaki
ScorchedMakiLv13

Its basically a chad type guy put on steroids and is basically a god with cosmic gigachad being above that

yenool_senut:gigachad?
2yr
1
The_reader_ofnovel
The_reader_ofnovelLv14

Who does the mc end up with ?

1yr
Plebston323
Plebston323Lv2

Hestia

The_reader_ofnovel:Who does the mc end up with ?
1yr
2
The_reader_ofnovel
The_reader_ofnovelLv14

That’s so unoriginal😑

Plebston323:Hestia
1yr
1
Plebston323
Plebston323Lv2

I believe the way the writer went about it allowed for a better route than the original anime and most fics.

The_reader_ofnovel:That’s so unoriginal😑
1yr
1
H3LI0S
H3LI0SLv13

many people , maybe more than half our population will want to have more than one spouse if there is no bad consequence comes along with that. It is the law, education and human right that prevent people from doing that.

Plebston323:Guess I’m just blessed to live here then, it’s disappointing to know people are like that 😕
1yr
1
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IAMGORGEOUS
IAMGORGEOUSLv4

Shame it's Not harem... I want Hephaestus😭😭😭 AHHH!!!!!😭?...........why [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] .... ......

2yr

ShadowMonarch185
ShadowMonarch185Lv3

No harem. Sign me up. Noiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

2yr
ysg
ysgLv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
LazyMartialSage
LazyMartialSageLv4

I like the story but I think the main character is really a hypocrite he flirts all-day but says he'll only love Hestia which is unreasonable and you nerfed quantum magic so much that it's not a joke

2yr
R0B
R0BLv2

The more I read the more the story becomes a slice of life. At this point nothing new happens in the story. It's boring. The story is not about the mc anymore, it's about his daughter. Dropped.

2yr
BobboLobbo
BobboLobboLv4

Good story. Very good to be fair, the grammar is on point, the story is developing towards a good path but I dropped it. The reason I dropped it is because of one reason but it's a very annoying thing. The reason being, the MC says and gives unnecessary information to others, as in: (spoiler) He told eina how he got stronger using potions to help her, and she'll use that information by giving it to the guild to help other adventurers and our MC doesn't get anything from it. He did this before as well. No benefits, only another illogical headache. Why give this information when an enemy might use this and why do it if you don't get anything out of it? I don't think I'd like to read a story that stresses me out. Anyway, good luck with this story. Bye

2yr
Cleiton_Sena_6677
Cleiton_Sena_6677Lv1

It had a lot of potential but in chapter 15, the story had a first and giant mistake for me that made it seem like a cliché isekai anime, I don't know if it was because of that, but from then on I even lost a lot of desire to continue reading and somehow the story seemed to have dropped in quality by 80%, DISAPPOINTMENT

2yr
gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5

one of the best danmachi fics ever happy it got posted here by author found with a copier which led to real author I never rate 5 in update release unless it is completely finished sooo full marks

2yr
eQzy
eQzyLv1

I started reading, and then I remembered that I had already read it. And I quit because of the unrealistic relationship between the characters and, most importantly... Seriously, the author? Did you bring home a bird from the dungeon, and then she became a human, the daughter of the protagonist, and has the powers of the OP? He literally thinks she's his daughter right after he finds the animal? which?

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