Shame it's Not harem... I want Hephaestus😭😭😭 AHHH!!!!!😭?...........why [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] .... ......

No harem. Sign me up. Noiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Honest Opinion, this is probably one of the better Danmachi Fanfics I've read. The pacings great, no mistakes grammatically so far, Bell's practically an original character which makes the story more lively, and the characters themselves seem more real than the show. Overall I think this will blow up quickly, keep it up!

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The more I read the more the story becomes a slice of life. At this point nothing new happens in the story. It's boring. The story is not about the mc anymore, it's about his daughter. Dropped.

Good story. Very good to be fair, the grammar is on point, the story is developing towards a good path but I dropped it. The reason I dropped it is because of one reason but it's a very annoying thing. The reason being, the MC says and gives unnecessary information to others, as in: (spoiler) He told eina how he got stronger using potions to help her, and she'll use that information by giving it to the guild to help other adventurers and our MC doesn't get anything from it. He did this before as well. No benefits, only another illogical headache. Why give this information when an enemy might use this and why do it if you don't get anything out of it? I don't think I'd like to read a story that stresses me out. Anyway, good luck with this story. Bye

It had a lot of potential but in chapter 15, the story had a first and giant mistake for me that made it seem like a cliché isekai anime, I don't know if it was because of that, but from then on I even lost a lot of desire to continue reading and somehow the story seemed to have dropped in quality by 80%, DISAPPOINTMENT

one of the best danmachi fics ever happy it got posted here by author found with a copier which led to real author I never rate 5 in update release unless it is completely finished sooo full marks

I started reading, and then I remembered that I had already read it. And I quit because of the unrealistic relationship between the characters and, most importantly... Seriously, the author? Did you bring home a bird from the dungeon, and then she became a human, the daughter of the protagonist, and has the powers of the OP? He literally thinks she's his daughter right after he finds the animal? which?