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D_Wolf
D_WolfLv12yr
2023-02-11 05:02

I recommend avoiding this one, as consistency is a problem. It starts out OK, with the MC teaching an elementary grade student. Even there the jump from where he goes to the bathroom and acquires his system, and then is suddenly able to answer the questions eloquently so that the student he is tutoring, basically is looking at him as if she is in love. He then realizes that his system can offer the opportunity to push the boundaries of human knowledge. He starts trying to answer random questions online and receives rewards that allows him to join a research project that has nothing to do with his studies. It turns into him face-slapping others that are participating in the research project. Over all a random bunch of garbage, with a system that is very poorly put together.

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SlowPainFulDeath
SlowPainFulDeathLv15

Agreed

Akabane
AkabaneLv6

It turns into hiv the novel

chaz_mars
chaz_marsLv15

I fail to notice the lack of consistency you speak of. yeah he started out tutoring a child but where else do you see the system starting from? he isnt exactly a teacher. and the thesis he writes is something he chooses to sign up for because he already gained the neccesary knowledge from his rewards for teaching people. he even had to go out of his way to research the relevant data before he could teach it.

D_Wolf
D_WolfLv1

There is no natural progression. At the beginning he is nothing and is unable to answer a relatively simple problem for his student that he is tutoring. He goes to the bathroom and suddenly is able to answer anything. The girl is basically suddenly looking at him like he is the love of her life. This is a major consistency problem. The online answer the questions scenario is also pretty bad. He finds a question and researches it for a few days so that he can offer an explanation that is easier to understand an is able to better teach those who are seeking answers. Then the novel twists into some sort of HIV research scenario with the standard face slapping going on for his own amusement. I just cannot in good conscience say anything good about this trash story.

chaz_mars:I fail to notice the lack of consistency you speak of. yeah he started out tutoring a child but where else do you see the system starting from? he isnt exactly a teacher. and the thesis he writes is something he chooses to sign up for because he already gained the neccesary knowledge from his rewards for teaching people. he even had to go out of his way to research the relevant data before he could teach it.
chaz_mars
chaz_marsLv15

he was able to answer the "relatively simple" problem because he looked up the answer and the system allowed him to give the answer in such a way as to stick in the students mind. if I recall it also wasnt actually that simple a question. it was not only a word problem but one of a specifically difficult type and source which is why his reward for it was answers to other questions from the same source. which coincided with similar questions that the student was working on. that isnt an inconsistency in the storytelling it is an inconsistency in his behavior. and she doesnt treat him as if she is in love. she treats him as a learning centered student treats a teacher that let's them comprehend what is being taught. as for the HIV research it was a well thought out part of the story. what other subject could you use as a reasonable jumping off point for something based around teaching others and gaining more knowledge about it. technological knowledge is too vast and easy to see through if a random person starts making innovation after innovation without a foundation and they also are difficult to get into those industries because they require high starting capital for materials. meanwhile HIV research especially at a school with little in terms of research facilities can be done entirely self study and can lead to a wider array of information gained without making people immediatly question where the information is from. and the face slapping isnt even overused here like it is elsewhere. 3 people in 40 chapters. and a 4th to come after the cliffhanger. not really that much.

D_Wolf
D_WolfLv1

To each their own. I stand by my impression of the story. I can see where there are some who might enjoy it. As for me I will definitely skip this one, as there were just too many things that repulsed me.

chaz_mars:he was able to answer the "relatively simple" problem because he looked up the answer and the system allowed him to give the answer in such a way as to stick in the students mind. if I recall it also wasnt actually that simple a question. it was not only a word problem but one of a specifically difficult type and source which is why his reward for it was answers to other questions from the same source. which coincided with similar questions that the student was working on. that isnt an inconsistency in the storytelling it is an inconsistency in his behavior. and she doesnt treat him as if she is in love. she treats him as a learning centered student treats a teacher that let's them comprehend what is being taught. as for the HIV research it was a well thought out part of the story. what other subject could you use as a reasonable jumping off point for something based around teaching others and gaining more knowledge about it. technological knowledge is too vast and easy to see through if a random person starts making innovation after innovation without a foundation and they also are difficult to get into those industries because they require high starting capital for materials. meanwhile HIV research especially at a school with little in terms of research facilities can be done entirely self study and can lead to a wider array of information gained without making people immediatly question where the information is from. and the face slapping isnt even overused here like it is elsewhere. 3 people in 40 chapters. and a 4th to come after the cliffhanger. not really that much.
Belle_Wood
Belle_WoodLv13

Just based on the synopsis alone... What a great cheat ability! Master everything with little effort!

JKingSniper
JKingSniperLv6

man why always these novels getting picked first

chaz_mars
chaz_marsLv15

you say that but it's been sitting in 1st place for like 2-3 months without being chosen.

JKingSniper:man why always these novels getting picked first
katerds00
katerds00Lv6

I'll answer that.... Co'z it's one of the quest. and there's many lazy bum (like me) who's lazy to scroll down and click the first top to vote Co'z it's easy 🤣🤣🤣

chaz_mars:you say that but it's been sitting in 1st place for like 2-3 months without being chosen.
austin_jimenez
austin_jimenezLv15

This is a good one to those that say otherwise I understand where you are coming from but remember this was a start of something new to this Author and nothing is perfect if webnovel chooses to pick this one we can see how the author improves the story and consistency why go out of your way to degrade it. I would love to personally read more of this I put a lot of votes on it.

LastGod
LastGodLv5

thanks for the time save

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