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Blazzing18
Blazzing18Lv151yr
2023-09-04 12:30

I REALLY HOPE THE AUTHOR READS THIS AND IMPLEMENTS IT!! THIS BOOK ISNT TO FAR AHEAD FROM WHERE I AM NOW SO U CAN DEFINITELY MAKE THE CHANGES!! I JUST GOT DONE WITH CHAPTER 333 AND I LIKE THE BOOK BUT Y DID HE STOP THE PLAYERS FROM COMING TO HIS PLEASE??? AT LEAST MAKE IT A SAFE HAVEN FOR ALL THE WOMEN THAT R SUFFERING OR JUST WANT A SAFE PLACE OR WHATEVER THIS WAY HE CAN AT START TO SAVE ALL OF THEM AND HE CAN SEND SOMEONE TO OTHERE CITYS TO GET NATIVES (ALL NOT JUST WOMEN) AND EVEN PLAYERS (ALL OF THEM) THIS WAY HE CAN GET MORE PEOPLE TO HIS KINGDOME AND THIS WAY HE CAN GET MORE PEOPLE THERE AND HAVE THEM AS MAN POWER AND START HIS ARMY MORE AND THE RESOURCES R BETTER SPENT ESPECIALLY THE SOUL POINTS!! AND WHEN HE GOES TO OTHER PLAYERS HE CAN SOUT OUT THERE TERRITORIES AND THE ONES THAT R EXTREMELY HORRIBLE LIKE HIS OLD BOSSES PLACE HE CAN JUST DESTROY ITAND THE ONES THAT LOOKED DOWN ON HIM WHILE THE OTHERS HE CAN GIVE THEM A CHANCE GO WITH HIM AND HAVE A NICE LIFE OR THEY CAN GO OFF ON THERE OWN!!! AND THE MC SHOULD FIND A CARD OR SOMETHING THAT ALLOWS HIM TO TAKE 1 SKILL FROM WHOEVER HE KILLS AND HE GETS TO PICK IT AND IF I REMEMBER CORRECTLY HE HAS A FUSION SKILL THEN HE CAN FUSION THE ONES ALIKE THIS WAY HE DOESNT HAVE TO MANY LIKE GENERAL CATEGORIES THEY DONT HAVE TO BE SPECIFIC ONES THEY CAN BE JUST LIKE HEALTH, FIGHTING, STEALTH, BEAST TAMING, MAGIC AND MAYBE MORE LIKE THAT INSTEAD OF BECAUSE SPECIFIC LIKE FIGHTING HAND TO HAND OR FIGHT LONG RANG AND SO ON IT CAN JUST BE FIGHTING CATEGORIES) THIS WAY HE CAN HAVE MORE SKILL AND THEN USE HIS VOID SKILLS TO MAKE COPYS OF THEM THIS WAY HE CAN USE THEM WITH VOID ENERGY AND HE CAN MAKE THE SKILLS EVEN BTTER FOR HIM TO USE!!! DONT MIND THA CAPS MY PHONE IS BROKE!!

Misty World: Start with SSS skill

HikaruKiki
3.9
481 Chs

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HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor

WOW!! You make so suprise ^^ First of all, with my respect, thank you so much for your review and advise. I will think about your advise and try to make to book better.I know there is many problem in my book, but I will try to make it better.I really thank you for your reivew ^^

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Tommyshelby
TommyshelbyLv14

okay this is goiod

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HikaruKiki
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Hi everyone, this is my first novel so... may be it's have so many mistake or something unlogic. Yeah, I know that and I'm working hard to correcting them. Please... keep supporing me and leave the comment, I will fix it immediatly. ^^ (Don't quit this book just read 30 first chapters ._. )

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MorningWood_Dao
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if you don't like an Idiot MC, this isn't for you. unnecessary redundant words, inconsistency (on names or number), lack of details on some skills or explanations. stupid mc(need to be said twice), author trying to be mysterious with the plot but did it in a bad way resulting in forced plot. this feels like reading a draft rather than novel. read first 10 chapters, you'll know what I feel. author/TL really need to rewrite the entire novel to make it more interesting. if you guys know a novel where the mc got a skill that give him x1000 rewards, this novel feels the same. both done in a bad way

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Requien
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gonna be honest i gave it a try read till the paywall came and most of the story was so random . in my eys dumb mc enmys too lucky and only focused with mc .

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pipagamer
pipagamerLv14

writing quality (4/5): it is very readable and has good grammer. story development (1/5): the amount of inconsistencies is enough for so many people, including me, to just drop this out of frustration. character design (2,5/5): not amazing but not as dumb as most mass transmigration/lord novels. updating stability (4/5): good, nothing really to say about it. world background (2/5): also a lot of inconsistencies.

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Darth_Ullyses
Darth_UllysesLv5

a character with 50 base stat can kill a ur with 2.5k stats (not even injured). suxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsux

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Venalter
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In the first time i though there will be OP MC trashing everyone around him but, fortunately it wasn't, even though in the beginning MC seems like OP since many people with much powerful than him appear it doesn't seem like he too OP. So yeah it was good novel to read. I kinda waiting for how MC develop his romance

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uWu_69
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this is a type of novel i would not recommend you guys to start reading now, let it have more than 200 chapters then you should start reading or else you will get frustrated like fr, like i am right now, not bas read if you can ignore the thicc plot armour for the real mc of this story.

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ToukaSimp
ToukaSimpLv13

Someone tell me this gets better because the grammar is really rough, the story and characters are insanely inconsistent and the author cant do basic math. I'm really contemplating dropping this Though I love the story idea And the system, the inconsistencies and forced plot is making it hard not to.

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Braham_
Braham_Lv11

Everyone is just a pawn of op beings that groom their chosen person and change their nature. Even the MC’s ppl/summons do stuff behind his back.

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Echelon_5
Echelon_5Lv15

Doesn't make any sense;the numbers don't add up from the get go in the first fight with Sherwin he should've died there and then mc has no personality, and then he does take a stand on something (no sleeping around until he deals with his ex) to then immediately sleeps with Vanu who, he acknowledges is insanely suspicious and does nothing about it honestly the ONLY thing that'll get me to continue to read this novel is if someone tells if he ever figures out he's getting played and what chapter, nothing less

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