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MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv52yr
2022-11-14 19:43

if you don't like an Idiot MC, this isn't for you. unnecessary redundant words, inconsistency (on names or number), lack of details on some skills or explanations. stupid mc(need to be said twice), author trying to be mysterious with the plot but did it in a bad way resulting in forced plot. this feels like reading a draft rather than novel. read first 10 chapters, you'll know what I feel. author/TL really need to rewrite the entire novel to make it more interesting. if you guys know a novel where the mc got a skill that give him x1000 rewards, this novel feels the same. both done in a bad way

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MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

it's an interesting novel, sadly it has so many setbacks. for someone who read for fun(like me), this isn't the one.

dombledorr
dombledorrLv14

author doesn't need to rewrite the novel, just find another one that suited you

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