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HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor2yr
2022-09-29 18:04

Hi everyone, this is my first novel so... may be it's have so many mistake or something unlogic. Yeah, I know that and I'm working hard to correcting them. Please... keep supporing me and leave the comment, I will fix it immediatly. ^^ (Don't quit this book just read 30 first chapters ._. )

Misty World: Start with SSS skill

HikaruKiki
3.9
481 Chs

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Ashborn_
Ashborn_Lv4

keep up the good work but please don't pick up girls like pokemon and don't make the harem to big

2yr
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HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor

Thks, I will try ^^

Ashborn_:keep up the good work but please don't pick up girls like pokemon and don't make the harem to big
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2yr
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Sinful_Cyanide
Sinful_CyanideLv15

Will there be lemons?

2yr
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LeBlorf
LeBlorfLv14

We can only hope.

Sinful_Cyanide:Will there be lemons?
2yr
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Zakaria_Moh
Zakaria_MohLv4

change I am the lord spnosis

2yr
1
HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor

what is spnosis?

Zakaria_Moh:change I am the lord spnosis
2yr
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Bardock_witcher
Bardock_witcherLv3

I think he meant synopsis🤔

HikaruKiki:what is spnosis?
2yr
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Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv13

Can I humbly ask you to recreate the novel after gaining enough experience?

2yr
3
HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor

Yeah ^^ I will try my best if I have time. Sorry for my bad ._.

Ancient_Egyptian:Can I humbly ask you to recreate the novel after gaining enough experience?
2yr
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DaoistuFSwDO
DaoistuFSwDOLv2

I think this starts out as a very intriguing novel. I really like it so far. I can't wait for the next chapters. (note: I think there can be more girls in the harem)

2yr
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tortle
tortleLv3

do we have lemons? 😏

HikaruKiki:Yeah ^^ I will try my best if I have time. Sorry for my bad ._.
2yr
1
HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor

sometime =))) but after chapter 70, you will have more lemons =)))

tortle:do we have lemons? 😏
2yr
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tortle
tortleLv3

ok added to Library gd sir.

HikaruKiki:sometime =))) but after chapter 70, you will have more lemons =)))
2yr
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HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor

well ._. thanks for your help ^^

tortle:ok added to Library gd sir.
2yr
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DemonKingLv99999
DemonKingLv99999Lv2

AUTHOR can you please 🙏 post a new discord link . previous one is not working

2yr
2
HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor

that is my private discord address ^^ you can talk to me through that link. I don't think people will like my book so I don't create any group for this book ._.

DemonKingLv99999:AUTHOR can you please 🙏 post a new discord link . previous one is not working
2yr
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Asorath
AsorathLv14

Author-San, can you fix the stat problem, I'm not trying to be mean here but how can a girl with over 2000 points in every stat can't kill a guy who absolute maximum star is 500?

2yr
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HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor

Hi Sukiyomi, soooo many people stoped reading and shouted at me that this is so stupid. But I won't fix it because it is the plot I want to build ^^. I know if I fix it, the readers will like it more. :D thanks for your remind ^^

Asorath:Author-San, can you fix the stat problem, I'm not trying to be mean here but how can a girl with over 2000 points in every stat can't kill a guy who absolute maximum star is 500?
2yr
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HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor

If you can read more, you will know why I leave a stupid plot like that ^^

Asorath:Author-San, can you fix the stat problem, I'm not trying to be mean here but how can a girl with over 2000 points in every stat can't kill a guy who absolute maximum star is 500?
2yr
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Unsightly
UnsightlyLv2

I have not read the novel but all the facts point to a stolen chinese novel

HikaruKiki:Hi Sukiyomi, soooo many people stoped reading and shouted at me that this is so stupid. But I won't fix it because it is the plot I want to build ^^. I know if I fix it, the readers will like it more. :D thanks for your remind ^^
2yr
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Other Reviews
MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

if you don't like an Idiot MC, this isn't for you. unnecessary redundant words, inconsistency (on names or number), lack of details on some skills or explanations. stupid mc(need to be said twice), author trying to be mysterious with the plot but did it in a bad way resulting in forced plot. this feels like reading a draft rather than novel. read first 10 chapters, you'll know what I feel. author/TL really need to rewrite the entire novel to make it more interesting. if you guys know a novel where the mc got a skill that give him x1000 rewards, this novel feels the same. both done in a bad way

2yr

Requien
RequienLv15

gonna be honest i gave it a try read till the paywall came and most of the story was so random . in my eys dumb mc enmys too lucky and only focused with mc .

2yr
pipagamer
pipagamerLv14

writing quality (4/5): it is very readable and has good grammer. story development (1/5): the amount of inconsistencies is enough for so many people, including me, to just drop this out of frustration. character design (2,5/5): not amazing but not as dumb as most mass transmigration/lord novels. updating stability (4/5): good, nothing really to say about it. world background (2/5): also a lot of inconsistencies.

1yr
Darth_Ullyses
Darth_UllysesLv5

a character with 50 base stat can kill a ur with 2.5k stats (not even injured). suxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsuxsux

2yr
Venalter
VenalterLv14

In the first time i though there will be OP MC trashing everyone around him but, fortunately it wasn't, even though in the beginning MC seems like OP since many people with much powerful than him appear it doesn't seem like he too OP. So yeah it was good novel to read. I kinda waiting for how MC develop his romance

2yr
uWu_69
uWu_69Lv4

this is a type of novel i would not recommend you guys to start reading now, let it have more than 200 chapters then you should start reading or else you will get frustrated like fr, like i am right now, not bas read if you can ignore the thicc plot armour for the real mc of this story.

2yr
ToukaSimp
ToukaSimpLv13

Someone tell me this gets better because the grammar is really rough, the story and characters are insanely inconsistent and the author cant do basic math. I'm really contemplating dropping this Though I love the story idea And the system, the inconsistencies and forced plot is making it hard not to.

1yr
Braham_
Braham_Lv11

Everyone is just a pawn of op beings that groom their chosen person and change their nature. Even the MC’s ppl/summons do stuff behind his back.

1yr
Slushy_Apollo
Slushy_ApolloLv15

Novel is good though inconsistent and the mc acts like a moron a lot but in my opinion I don’t think it is good enough to spend money on

2yr
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