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In the moment he returns to his home planet, the entire story falls apart. It becomes completely boring and no longer stays true to itself from that point on. I deeply regret that a story with such great potential was ruined. I gave up on this book.

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The whole book is strange to me. Many things are repeated, which I think is not a coincidence. There are plenty of logical errors. The fights are very boring and easily confuse you. The world building is good and so is the power system. I like the overpowered main character. But basically because there are too many the book is flawed and the author shamelessly dares to ask for money for it, it is completely unreadable to me.

This novel is quite a disappointment for me. There are inconsistencies in it and the personality of the main character is quite incomprehensible in many ways. Why exactly is he the cool man that every woman wants? I think this part is completely incomprehensible. But so are many other things. Overall, I don't really recommend it.

There are so many holes in the story that it is ridiculous. There are so many nonsensical things in the book that it is already a joke. The author definitely does not know how to write a book and build the world logically. Please think again and write it again.

So you like stupid characters who get beaten up as much as they want and remain as naive as at the beginning. I understand

The book is a piece of shit. The author lives in a dream world and refuses to pull his head out of his ass. The demi-humans attacked the continent. Indeed, a lot of people died in this attack. However, what did the main character expect, how will they treat the demi-humans who remained on the continent after this? ?Then maybe they will receive them with love or what? The main character is a naive little child who, despite having suffered a lot because of his naivety, still hasn't learned anything from it, but despite this, the author claims that the main character is smart, which is obviously not true. This book is something stomach-churning .

The demi-humans attacked the continent, but what did the miserable main character honestly expect. Will the demi-humans be treated well after the war after slaughtering the humans? Or I don't know what the hell he was imagining. It's only natural that they will be slaves. This is the case even in the war between humans in the past was in our history.

It's funny that the author presents the main character as smart, yet he behaves like a 2-year-old child. In his previous life, he suffered and died because of his kindness and naivety. Nevertheless, now he plays the savior again as soon as he has the opportunity. The main character seems unable to learn from his mistakes, which it shows that he is a naive idiot. Author, decide whether you want to write a smart character or an idiot character, because the two do not work at the same time. However, this naivety and kindness that he shows is quite disgusting or rather stomach-turning.

I'm seriously starting to doubt life. Why can't an author write a character whose IQ level hits the normal value? Why? But really why? Right from the start, we have our hapless idiot protagonist. You get the opportunity to see the evolutionary paths of domesticated animals. One would think that he would be smart and since he doesn't have much money and at the same time he doesn't have much time, that's why he invests his little money in a single animal and chooses the highest evolutionary path, for which he can of course buy the materials. Of course not. Why is that? For what? Making some reasonable and smart decision? You can never expect that from a character. Instead, he chooses the one with the lowest possible potency and the unfortunate cripple wants to buy yet another beast. Wouldn't the better choice be to invest all your money in buying the best materials and choose the path with the highest potency and thereby ensure faster growth in the beginning and possibly bring about the disadvantage that arose from waking up your talent late. PLEASE, AUTHOR, IF YOU WANT TO WRITE SUCH STUPID THINGS, IT'S FINE, BUT THEN KEEP THIS IN YOUR NOTES AND READ IT IF YOU'RE BORED AND DON'T BOTHER THE PEOPLE. Phew, it's very annoying, this is no longer a normal novel.