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GTHarris08
GTHarris08Lv31yr
2024-01-14 16:15

it's an amazing work of art.😁the only slight off-putter is the minor grammatical errors, if not, it'd be perfect.

The Time Repeat itself

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LeeYou
LeeYouLv2

it's good got a potential but because if the gramar. naah your just a new writer right? just keep going I support you as long as you keep going dont stop

2yr

Dorordoro
DorordoroLv2

the start is trilling the story seem kinda dark but naah who cares got a potential and room to become good story i will suport you aswell Author-nim

2yr
Drei05
Drei05Lv4

Making grammatical mistakes is fine since you're new and english isn't your main language. You're doing great for a first timer, so keep up the good work! (๑¯ω¯๑)

2yr
Ja_Ka_0195
Ja_Ka_0195Lv2

This has a good and nice plot with a lot of good characters but the author has a long way to go and grow it's a nice book but the grammar throws me off can't wait for future chaps

2yr
Elona_Alone
Elona_AloneLv2

Are you looking for a time escape novel? well this is for you. I must admit that the author really did a great job in writing this beautiful novel. Everything is well explain, and despite the fact that this isn't my typical kind of story, I'm still going to read. Ps. This novel will keep you to the edge (◔‿◔)

2yr
Zenithnovels
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Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!

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