**suddenly drops dead due to peak fiction**

who says he's gonna become the strongest? most dangerous, yeah. but there'll always be someone who would effortlessly be able to kick his ass ten times over without breaking a sweat.

Ok, I'll give it to you, you have one of the best first chapters I have read. the story is dynamic and has a natural flow, and the mc is relatable and enjoyable to read about. I really like your writing style and the plot is definitely worth reading. I look forward to more chapters soon! keep up the good work.

nope🤭🤭

dont worry, the chapters will gradually get longer and longer

Great job! You finally wrote something actually worth reading! Tai is a well crafted 3D character whose plight is very understandable. The world background is lacking a bit though, but let's just say that it's because the work is still in it's starting chapters. I look forward to seeing more and more chapters!🤞🤞

Ok.. The first two chapters are kinda dark.. But the writing style is impeccable and the story flows really well. hope to see how Alex escapes tho

Whoa, Nova. Really dark start

it probably does

ok, this book is really amazing.👍 I'm getting some strong reincarnated as a slime vibes in the beginning chapters though. your writing style is impeccable and easy to read, but I feel like you should explain some stuff more. 🤞🤞 fingers crossed for more chapters 🤞🤞

the grammar is spotless and your writing style is easy to read. 👍 but what I like most is Jack's character development. we see the go from the weak dude he was, to where he is now, and I hope to see him grow much more powerful. 🤞🤞 looking forward to seeing more!!

You'll see 🤭

I don't have a discord

for the first time in history, we finally have a transmigrator who isn't some weak teenager

level up hypermarketer🤜🤛

her golden finger!!!

well that sucks

this is the first time I've ever given a full five stars in any review, the writing is flawless and the story moves at a nice pace. Never have I ever seen such a concept in my life. your story is simply unique and amazing. keep up the good work!

Revenge!!!🤜🤛

he didn't die, did he?