Item: The Time Repeat itself
Rating: 5
Author: Dorordoro

DorordoroLv22yr

2022-08-09 11:48

the start is trilling the story seem kinda dark but naah who cares got a potential and room to become good story i will suport you aswell Author-nim

The Time Repeat itself

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Making grammatical mistakes is fine since you're new and english isn't your main language. You're doing great for a first timer, so keep up the good work! (๑¯ω¯๑)

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